fun piece, you have an interesting way of carrying on a musical phrase, thats a good thing. very fun to listen to. awesome :)

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I like the sound of the instruments you chose and how they sound together. Very bright and upbeat.
The production is solid, nothing catches my ear as being off.
The melody is kind of generic, but it's the sort of melody that will end up playing in my head 3 hours from now.
I also like the song art (although I don't get a sense of storminess in the music).

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Don't worry about how long it takes to make your music. Spending 3 days working on a piece of uninspired music isn't necessarily going to make it magically good; whereas something done in 10 minutes might end up being a small gem.

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Ars longa, vita brevis.

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This piece has a lot going for it including some nice elements and a lot of interesting variety that makes it listenable and interesting.
I do thinkl that there are some problems (very minor) with the timing of some of the tracks in some few small places. If feels as if the lead synth part is off the beat in the middle section.
I agree with the other comment that you have a lot going for you because you are starting at a young enoungh age. I started at a young age but did not stick with it. As an adult the only music I played were records on the radio. Years later I discovered some modest talent in compiling music with Garage Band. Makes me wish I had stayed with it when I was your age!..

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very enjoyable. has a simple yet complex soud annd feel to it.

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