Think it's a nice demo with some pretty open lyrics.
Keep it up, man!
LL

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thanks. was just something to pass the time i s'pose.

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Robert Smith lied, boys do cry

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lots of emotion here good song!

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funny how i get the best comments on things i don't even try to really make good lol. seems i get more for five minutes of not trying then 5 months of endless hours recording. thanks for the comment.

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Robert Smith lied, boys do cry

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funny how i get the best comments on things i don't even try to really make good lol. seems i get more for five minutes of not trying then 5 months of endless hours recording. thanks for the comment.

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Robert Smith lied, boys do cry

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'So why should I try' - Just shows that your song is answering your own question. Stop trying so hard - the simplicity of this song when you are not trying showcases your natural talent perfectly.
Cheers
Len

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my thoughts exactly. that's why i recorded this i think. in trying to hard we seem to lose the natuaral connection that makes things beautiful. after so much work learning the mechanics of music for a while i lost the point that there are no rules to music simply guide lines that help us understand what we're doing or something.

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Robert Smith lied, boys do cry

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