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| GeorgeLikesMusic said 885 days ago (June 20th, 2007) | |
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youre right the piano could be a little louder. Theres no software guitar in it :- but I plan on adding acoustic gut and some light acoustic drums or other percussion (not MIDI, of course) --- The world is listening friends, make some noise.<br> -Aaron Burch<br><a href="http://myspace.com/thegoodcheer">The Good Cheer</a> Check out my latest song called The Sound of Men Weeping EXTENDED
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| GeorgeLikesMusic said 885 days ago (June 20th, 2007) | |
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ooooo ohhh are you talking about the bass? --- The world is listening friends, make some noise. -Aaron Burch The Good Cheer Check out my latest song called The Sound of Men Weeping EXTENDED
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| alexweiler said 885 days ago (June 20th, 2007) | |
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yes, the bass sorry, of course it's the bass i was talking about. Check out my latest song called Roaming (Heavy Remix)
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| GeorgeLikesMusic said 885 days ago (June 20th, 2007) | |
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Gotcha! Ya, I would prefer acoustic bass, but this was pretty much a MIDI experiment/messing around (and the other small problem of me not having a bass haha) --- The world is listening friends, make some noise. -Aaron Burch The Good Cheer Check out my latest song called The Sound of Men Weeping EXTENDED
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| alexweiler said 885 days ago (June 20th, 2007) | |
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No shame Aaron ... ... i guess, the most important thing to focus is the idea ;) btw. i have the same problem (of not having acoustical instruments and the skills to handle them) and it's pretty hard (if not impossible) to simulate acoustical instruments authentically. keep up the good work ... Check out my latest song called Roaming (Heavy Remix)
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| Cori Ander said 885 days ago (June 20th, 2007) | |
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Nice theme I dig the theme. It has something .. it is interesting. Will it become longer? I think it has the potential for a second part with an alternating theme, which then comes back to this theme. Check out my latest song called Guitar test — Martin CSN (Gerry Tolman Tribute)
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| lavalamp said 885 days ago (June 20th, 2007) | |
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If you want........ If you want to improve the song write some lyrics for it because I don't think it stands alone. But, musically it's very good. Are you shy about singing? Can't come up with words? Drop me a line if you need some help. Ready, willing and able.....I think. LL Check out my latest song called Googolplex Times Zero
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| lavalamp said 885 days ago (June 20th, 2007) | |
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Sorry man You CAN sing, just heard some of your other stuff. Why don't you put some lyrics on it then? LL Check out my latest song called Googolplex Times Zero
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| GeorgeLikesMusic said 885 days ago (June 20th, 2007) | |
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ya ill try it. I'm at my dads house all week and all my mics and interfaces are at my moms house. It will happen eventually --- The world is listening friends, make some noise. -Aaron Burch The Good Cheer Check out my latest song called The Sound of Men Weeping EXTENDED
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| MissChaos said 885 days ago (June 20th, 2007) | |
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emotive, indeed I agree on all of alexweiler's points; this has much potential. I'd maybe even suggest slowing down the tempo a bit, too. It sounds a tad rushed for some reason, given the mood and description. I like the very unexpected movement in this that shows up in certain parts. A little refining and a bit more dynamics (crescendo/decrescendo, flow, fluidness, detail, depth, movement...) and this has wonderful potential! Check out my latest song called Mama Cries - Album Version (MJRF)
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alexweiler
I like the emotional compostion and the sad mood you created here. Well done! Marginal note: My only critique is about the flat sound and the choice of instruments. Since the piano plays the lead it could come a little bit clearer and more volumnous. Did you think about replacing the software guitar (it's pretty hard to get an authentic sound) and experience with alternate strings?