What Now?

SEAC99

Genre: Acoustic Rock

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Description

A song for a heartbreak.. Which is exactly what I got.. All Original..

Stephen Coleman.

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Lyrics

You've taken me..
Now what am I supposed to do now?
Do I just sit here and wait?
To see your smiling face?
Just take my heart right out of me and crush it.
Stab it.
Just Stab it..[x4]
You take my life away from me now.. :'(

Song Stats

Hits: 820
Comments: 14
Fans: 3
Plays: 83
Downloads: 48
Votes: 5
Uploaded: Jun 26, 2007 - 07:35:32 PM
Last Updated: Jun 26, 2007 - 07:35:32 PM Last Played: Nov 02, 2009 - 05:52:22 AM

Song License

Creative Commons License:
NoDerivs-NonCommercial

Song Actions

Hardware:

MacBook Pro

Software:

Garageband 3.0

Comments

	said 880 days ago (June 26th, 2007)
	powerfull the lyrics are very powerfull. you should to use less fx on the singing. Is this all synth very cool composition! cool song

Morning Light	Morning Light said 880 days ago (June 26th, 2007)
	Beautifully composed... painful expressions.......I love the type of sounds you use and how your voice meshes with the music so well.......I wish you better days!!!! Check out my latest song called Morning Rose

Godchaser

Godchaser said 880 days ago (June 27th, 2007)

Right there.....
feeling your pain - nice use of sounds which beautifully convey that brokeness many of us have at one time shared - well done all the way around. Remember, even when we're in the 'valley' we can use that ill for good (as your song testifies) and how wonderful to know we can overcome & be even moreso when standing on the 'peak' -looking forward to even better from you!
Blessings,

- Godchaser

Check out my latest song called As i Walk

SEAC99	SEAC99 said 878 days ago (June 29th, 2007)
	wow. deep comment lol. i thank you for that tho.. it makes me wanna try more of this.. its not my usual thing.. trance is my thing but thank you that was awesome to hear that! :) --- DJ'ing is my life. Period. Check out my latest song called Borealis (Original Mix)

lavalamp	lavalamp said 880 days ago (June 27th, 2007)
	Like the atmosphere Nice effort and atmosphere. Agree with Egobandit about the effects on the vox, a little too much. Think just some reverb would be nice. Is that you playing or is that loops(I'm talking about the guitar sound) GOOOOOOOOOOOOOD! LL Check out my latest song called Googolplex Times Zero

SEAC99	SEAC99 said 879 days ago (June 28th, 2007)
	thank you! nope thats me playing lol. thank you all for commenting you guys are so nice.. make me feel so much better! :) --- DJ'ing is my life. Period. Check out my latest song called Borealis (Original Mix)

screamalexz	screamalexz said 879 days ago (June 28th, 2007)
	beautiful the vocals remind me of simple plan in the song "untitled" that happens to be one of two songs by them i actually thing are good so that's a compliment. seems songs with few lyrics always mean the most because we don't have words for what we feel. it's beautiful. Check out my latest song called Die (Album Version)

SEAC99

SEAC99 said 878 days ago (June 29th, 2007)

Simple Plan eh? lol
Hey dood. Thank you, actually thats the only song besides crazy that i like from them. so it is a compliment! thank you so much! me and my friend are gonna be starting a band soon.. we have one song but its really ametur from what we wanna make.. i'll try to put the songs on here.. thanks for your time!

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DJ'ing is my life. Period.

Check out my latest song called Borealis (Original Mix)

	said 879 days ago (June 28th, 2007)
	I like.. the feelings in this one.... Sad but very nice done... Keep 'em coming.

MKVX	MKVX said 878 days ago (June 29th, 2007)
	Out of your normal league. Its good to see you out there doing something alternate to your usual musical orientation. Feelings, good or bad, are always great sources of inspiration for songs. good stuff. Check out my latest song called Momentous Occasion

nevermine	nevermine said 812 days ago (September 3rd, 2007)
	AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME man i hope u get on radio someday, ugot it hey, ugot what it takes, wish u all the best with your career and encourage u to keep being true to your emotions in your music... well done Check out my latest song called fall into the stars

Mystified	Mystified said 793 days ago (September 22nd, 2007)
	Simplicity works here.... Really nice track, SEAC :) Sorry that it's born out of sadness and heartbreak...but this is a great way to express those feelings. I like this style/simplicity. Hope to hear more from you! :) Check out my latest song called For the Beauty of the Earth

*itiswotitis*	*itiswotitis* said 785 days ago (September 29th, 2007)
	yaaay SEAC nice to hear your voice...lovely song.. nice to hear u do a different style..... I hope things are on the up now.. Time is a geat healer!! Check out my latest song called WALKING BASS IN THE CLOUDS

racerat

racerat said 784 days ago (September 30th, 2007)

beautiful and touching
Great tune. Beautiful melody. Touching lyrics, short and direct. I agree with Ego that it would be good for the effects to be pulled out a bit on the vox. I also think that the vocal volume is a bit low and the lyrics get lost in the instrumental passages. Otherwise, great stuff. And a shout out to Nevermine for the plug on the forums, otherwise I don't know if I would have found this.

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Artist Info

Name: Stephen Coleman

Born in Germany on a United States Airforce base, Elycion, age 15, has made quite a name for himself in the past few months. He's met some amazing people that have helped him along his way to hopeful fame. Most threw myspace infact. Others threw diff... [see more]

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