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Rock (1084), Alternative (225), heartbreak (14), hurt (17), broken heart (4), time (76), questioning (2), ? (13), whatever (8), love (945), stolen (4), what (27), now (9), what now (1), knife (7), stab (1), heart (106), crying (13), stupid (29), hate (43), emotion (14), ambience (9), Alternative Rock (27), acoustic (461)
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Description:
A song for a heartbreak.. Which is exactly what I got.. All Original..
Stephen Coleman.
Lyrics:
You've taken me..
Now what am I supposed to do now?
Do I just sit here and wait?
To see your smiling face?
Just take my heart right out of me and crush it.
Stab it.
Just Stab it..[x4]
You take my life away from me now.. :'(
Hardware:
MacBook Pro
Software:
Garageband 3.0
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powerfull &mdash 06/26/07 - 08:00:06 PM
the lyrics are very powerfull. you should to use less fx on the singing. Is this all synth very cool composition! cool song [ Reply to This ]
Beautifully composed... &mdash 06/26/07 - 10:11:37 PM
painful expressions.......I love the type of sounds you use and how your voice meshes with the music so well.......I wish you better days!!!! [ Reply to This ]
Right there..... &mdash 06/27/07 - 01:58:37 AM
feeling your pain - nice use of sounds which beautifully convey that brokeness many of us have at one time shared - well done all the way around. Remember, even when we're in the 'valley' we can use that ill for good (as your song testifies) and how wonderful to know we can overcome & be even moreso when standing on the 'peak' -looking forward to even better from you!
Blessings,
- Godchaser [ Reply to This ]
wow. &mdash 06/29/07 - 09:23:48 AM
deep comment lol. i thank you for that tho.. it makes me wanna try more of this.. its not my usual thing.. trance is my thing but thank you that was awesome to hear that! :)
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Like the atmosphere &mdash 06/27/07 - 03:52:15 AM
Nice effort and atmosphere. Agree with Egobandit about the effects on the vox, a little too much. Think just some reverb would be nice. Is that you playing or is that loops(I'm talking about the guitar sound)
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!
LL [ Reply to This ]
thank you! &mdash 06/28/07 - 08:53:40 AM
nope thats me playing lol. thank you all for commenting you guys are so nice.. make me feel so much better! :)
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beautiful &mdash 06/28/07 - 08:59:52 AM
the vocals remind me of simple plan in the song "untitled" that happens to be one of two songs by them i actually thing are good so that's a compliment. seems songs with few lyrics always mean the most because we don't have words for what we feel. it's beautiful. [ Reply to This ]
Simple Plan eh? lol &mdash 06/29/07 - 09:26:32 AM
Hey dood. Thank you, actually thats the only song besides crazy that i like from them. so it is a compliment! thank you so much! me and my friend are gonna be starting a band soon.. we have one song but its really ametur from what we wanna make.. i'll try to put the songs on here.. thanks for your time!
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I like.. &mdash 06/28/07 - 09:03:52 AM
the feelings in this one.... Sad but very nice done... Keep 'em coming. [ Reply to This ]
Out of your normal league. &mdash 06/29/07 - 11:22:06 AM
Its good to see you out there doing something alternate to your usual musical orientation. Feelings, good or bad, are always great sources of inspiration for songs. good stuff. [ Reply to This ]
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME &mdash 09/03/07 - 06:03:00 AM
man i hope u get on radio someday, ugot it hey, ugot what it takes, wish u all the best with your career and encourage u to keep being true to your emotions in your music... well done [ Reply to This ]
Simplicity works here.... &mdash 09/22/07 - 02:10:23 AM
Really nice track, SEAC :)
Sorry that it's born out of sadness and heartbreak...but this is a great way to express those feelings.
I like this style/simplicity. Hope to hear more from you! :) [ Reply to This ]
yaaay &mdash 09/29/07 - 09:20:19 PM
SEAC nice to hear your voice...lovely song.. nice to hear u do a different style.....
I hope things are on the up now.. Time is a geat healer!! [ Reply to This ]
beautiful and touching &mdash 09/30/07 - 08:02:44 PM
Great tune. Beautiful melody. Touching lyrics, short and direct. I agree with Ego that it would be good for the effects to be pulled out a bit on the vox. I also think that the vocal volume is a bit low and the lyrics get lost in the instrumental passages. Otherwise, great stuff. And a shout out to Nevermine for the plug on the forums, otherwise I don't know if I would have found this. [ Reply to This ]
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