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Last Played: Sep 23, 2008 - 01:57:45 AM
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Uploaded: Jul 06, 2007 - 08:28:18 AM
Last Updated: Jul 01, 2007 - 01:22:57 AM



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Description:
A song I wrote about a girl.

Lyrics:
I know the burden that
I choose to bear is heavy
But I know that
Yours is more

I sit in silence
And I wait for you to answer
All these new questions that
Life threw your way

And life rushes by
And I know you do all that you can
And life rushes by
But honey I'm only one man

Tell me that you want me
Tell me that you miss me
Tell me that you love me
And I'll be all right
Tell me that you're dyin'
Of all the tears you're cryin'
Tell me that you never want to be apart again...

First you told me that
you'd come back for certain
Now you say that
you don't know anymore

The day you went away
I said "It won't be forever"
But now the rock I held on to
Has become a stone for me to throw

And life rushes by
And I know you do all that you can
And your life rushed by
But honey, I'm only one man

Tell me that you want me
Tell me that you miss me
Tell me that you love me
And I'll be all right
Tell me that you're dyin'
Of all the tears you're cryin'
Tell me that you never want to be apart again

I know if I just give it time
Then everything will fall in line
If you come back or if you stay
I won't let my life unwind

But for now my heart will give
All it has, and all it is
That is why I sing my song
But i need to know you're with me

Tell me that you want me
Tell me that you miss me
Tell me that you love me
And I'll be all right
Tell me that you're dyin'
Of all the tears you're cryin'
Tell me that you never want to be apart again

I know the path
Is lonely and uncertain But
I'll gladly walk it
For just the chance to be with you

Tell me that you want me
Tell me that you miss me
Tell me that you love me
And I'll be all right
Tell me that you're dyin'
Of all the tears you're cryin'
Tell me that you never want to be apart again

And so I sit here
In silent desperation
I wonder if you
Are doing the same

Hardware:
Yamaha PF-500
MacBook

Software:
GarageBand
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Classic &mdash 07/06/07 - 08:46:47 AM
One of my favorite all timer songs is Kathy's Song by Paul Simon. Yours is a classic, solid pop ballad, very well written. I like the live feel, the open mic intimate authenticity; but I'd also like to hear crisper vocals, something less condensed with less mids. The overall track is also kind of soft and could use volume pushing (limiting, compression). Very solid writing and a warm soulful performance.

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