Took a glance at the lyrics heard the guitar bounce in and I was hooked! then you started singing and I knew you know it all.. sorry but this hits me in the gut sends my hairs standing on end and all because I know Thanks great song!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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thank you for the post. im not sure what i know but i think i have a handle on the crazy work of a relationship. i mostly think that i must be the only one but your post helps me to realize that im pretty universal in my song writing
thanks
tim

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Everything from a beatle chord progression in the chorus to the police then to a bit of Mike and the Mechanics.

Really has some depth with all the layers.Cool

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a lot going on to create the sound you have here.
Bravo to the way you put together.
Nice layers in the music, with a depth provided by the vocal, that fits the sound bed perfectly.

My comment= great sounding tune
the vocal is a bit strange at times, very creative at all times. IMHO i would do a few more straight forward harmonies. To kind of ground the melody. Thats just what I here, when i listen.
just a hought
;)

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for give me a note... LOVE it.... And my friend take away the [Explicit] and you have more listners..... :D)

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Great lyrics. I dug the opening Psychedelic Reggae feel, the delicate rhythm, altho the mix is a tad out of balance (voice too soft, rhythm guitar too loud, reverbs all mixed up), and the spacey details you add, like you're still in the midst of this confounding relationship that continues to mess with your head. Consider remixing with less effects, less reverb and more volume on the vocals, and bring down the one rhythm guitar? And maybe a guitar solo during the instrumental break? And maybe shorten the track (unless you're planning a cool music video with it), cuz it really flips out by the end. Cool ideas, great lyrics.

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Bi Bop vibe. Always a fan of that style of music. The mood of the song is in tune with the message. Thanks for sharing.

John

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love these lyrics, obviously heartfelt and honest.
I also enjoyed the 'feel' you managed to convey in the music.
Cheers
Len



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Really, why does everyone get upset with "bad language". Think you use it nicely and in the right place. Very good song, man. Words are words and that's all.
Strong vox, too.

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Another great job, Tim, of serving up the a mix of tenderness and darkness - both in story and in music.

Suggesting things would be different if this were a different kind of love admits to a certain level of abnormality (not necessarily a bad thing!) ... and that concept gets reinforced by all of those strange, exotic, ambient sounds snaking in and around the musical core.

Everything is wrong ... yet somehow it's right : >

There's only one line I have trouble hearing (the end of the final verse, "...and I think about where I've been" drops out). Other than that, the balances are fine to my ear. In fact, I like the way you fill the sound-space, with much going on, sometimes fighting, sometimes co-habitating, sometimes harmonizing - I'd say, "delicious right out of the box."

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the lyrics are deep and heartfelt. there's a strange undercurrent to it.

the chords and effects feel right at home.

i love the ending - it's right out there in space!

thanks

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the insight in your object lesson from the opposing perspective. Again the choice of images in your lyrics really brings the whole picture of this particular relationship in to sharp focus. And your judicious use of that one word (fuck) works because it underscores the main idea in that particular line. Use the word too much in a composition and it loses it's power to persuade the listener of it's importance. (unless you're writing in the RAP/HipHop genre. :-) Then you must use it more frequently to get the feel of the emotionally charged environment that inspired that style of music.) I really loved the music on this one!!! Now, this ego thing between a man and a woman kinda all makes sense.

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