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| 7732 said 877 days ago (July 2nd, 2007) | |
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Thanks man! Thanks so much for the advice, you actually got me thinking, if this gets layered up a bit, it can sound much better, thanks so much for your comment! Check out my latest song called R.I.P Instrumental
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| fourtywatt said 876 days ago (July 3rd, 2007) | |
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hey man remember that i like you : ) and that this is just one opinion, but after a few repeats this one feels like a "midi file" of a Nelly song to me (that's not a good thing) but everything else you've done so far i have liked. keep 'em comin.... i look forward to your next beats Check out my latest song called lil' nate (doin' lil jon)
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| 7732 said 876 days ago (July 3rd, 2007) | |
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What up 40!!! Thanks man! Hey man, I appreciate all kinds of feedback, again I'm learning and growing, half the stuff I make is probably wack, but I try to improve. It's funny you mentioned the Nelly thing, cause I kinda got a feel for what your talking about, but for some reason, I feel like this can be one of those generic anthem songs, lol hence the title. Anyhow man, much love for the constructive feedback, and just wanted to say thanks! More stuff to follow!!!! Peace! Check out my latest song called R.I.P Instrumental
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| spitlogic said 876 days ago (July 4th, 2007) | |
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Ok I like where this is going. There is much that could be added to it to fill in the gaps. but a nice start all around. I guess I caught this at the right time since Im deletng most of my macjam alerts because I cant really come to the site much, but Im glad I caught this one. Check out my latest song called Guillotine
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| 7732 said 875 days ago (July 4th, 2007) | |
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Whud up Spittttt!!! Thanks for the comment my man, I feel like this beat might be a little generic, but I'm gonna try to revivie this one, it needs more layers, more instruments, more musiccccccccccccccccccc!!! Thanks for checking it out!!!! Much appreciated! Check out my latest song called R.I.P Instrumental
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| guitapick said 874 days ago (July 5th, 2007) | |
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Definitely... ...an anthem. A solid base for a cool tune. Along those lines, you might think of weaving a snare drum in and out. Maybe a trumpet. Lyrics. All your call, 7732. I like this. It's got a sweet innocence to it. Which can lead to all kinds of places in terms of contrast and similarities. Check out my latest song called Outside the Corral
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| 7732 said 874 days ago (July 5th, 2007) | |
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Excellent... Suggestions, I've been wanting to tweak this sound a lot. I love the idea of snaring the drums, never really thought about that...and believe it or not, I brought the trumpet into this, but I couldn't get the right sounds to come out, back to the drawing board....trumpet, drums...You the man, thanks for the comment!!! Check out my latest song called R.I.P Instrumental
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| 7732 said 862 days ago (July 17th, 2007) | |
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Much... love JB, thanks for the advice...Some really good tips there, been trying to improve this beat for awhile there...It'll get the light of day one day i hope! Make it go BOOM BOOM CLAP!!! Check out my latest song called R.I.P Instrumental
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Cool contrasts against the heavy beat So much more could be lyered on top but thats just me I realy dug this almost hyptnotic. Very cool