Fallen Angel(sorry)

screamalexz

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i swear i won't post this song again for a very long time lol. i'm sure everyone on this site is tired of all the recordings of this song. but once again re-worked, melody changed around, sung higher(seems that though with singing it has been hardest for me to raise my vocal range i stay in tune better in a higher range) so after my many months MIA here is an old song ive been working on for what 3 years now? finally in the form i want it. this for the most part is how it sounded in my head i think when i write it. hmm the girl i wrote this about didn't like it because she said it sounds stereo typical. funny thing is when i play live this is a favorite.

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Lyrics

my fallen angel
where have you gone
my fallen angel
where are you

was it just to much to take
your wings torn and broken
was it just to much to break
falling to the ground

choking on my pitty
drown in sorrow
you have left me here
to die alone

chorus

my heart's torn and broken
you are falling faster
just when i need you
but you can't fly anymore

no longer will you lift me up
give me guidance, help me through
your beauty falling in despair
i feel used and broken

Song Stats

Hits: 775
Comments: 19
Fans: 3
Plays: 125
Downloads: 48
Votes:
Uploaded: Jul 09, 2007 - 06:44:47 PM
Last Updated: Jul 10, 2007 - 08:45:30 AM Last Played: Nov 16, 2009 - 11:19:19 AM

Song License

Creative Commons License:
Attribution-NoDerivs-NonCommercial

Song Actions

Keywords:

fallen (14), love (1150), pain (72), accoustic (104)

Hardware:

fender accoustic, tone port ux2, condensor mic

Software:

cakewalk

Comments

drakonis

drakonis said 866 days ago (July 9th, 2007)

great strides!
Hey, this is sounding quite a lot better... what an improvement! Your guitar strumming is now strong and even. Your singing is on key... and its a nice set of chords you got there, I want to tell you that your practicing is paying off! Do you feel it? Next will be singing lessons to not sing from the nose, but from the heart...

I'm excited to hear such great progress in you. Keep it up!
ttfn,
Drakonis

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screamalexz

screamalexz said 866 days ago (July 9th, 2007)

the dragon!
haha yea i noticed that. i was a bit off today. i had just woken up and also had something stuck in my throat from eating so it was coming out a bit not right, but i decided to just not worry and get this up because it's better then what was up and is how i want it melody wise and everything. recordings never liked me, but i'm getting over it. working on getting live shows again!

---
Robert Smith lied, boys do cry

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The Far Away Boys	The Far Away Boys said 866 days ago (July 10th, 2007)
	..... Holy Crap. I hate Emo. This song is boring. Check out my latest song called Together on the Sand

screamalexz	screamalexz said 866 days ago (July 10th, 2007)
	lol lol, then don't listen. --- Robert Smith lied, boys do cry Check out my latest song called Die (Album Version)

said 866 days ago (July 10th, 2007)

from the heart!
And that is just the way I like it. You drew my attention through your lovely mature comments on the forum. Although this song wont reach the number 1 spot, the lyrics are from the heart, the guitar just accompanies it. I would suggest playing it a tad slower, so you can focus more on the way you sing it, it sometimes seems like you're grasping for air/ focusing on playing the guitar, or you have a nasal voice in which case you could disregard this last comment. The reason why peeps like it is cos it is from the heart. And the endresult is that you like to play the song, feel the song and the peeps enjoy the song. Strong lyrics, mind u, when u get older the way you feel about women wont change, perhaps the words will change (like becoming mature= becoming shallow/flat).

keep em coming

Jb

screamalexz	screamalexz said 866 days ago (July 10th, 2007)
	thanks actually i think i may have been playing a little slow lol. i was singing a little nasal in the recording cuz i had just woken up was out of it and made the mistake of eating something so it was kinda stuck in my throat and this wasn't the best take but that's alright. thanks for the comment :) --- Robert Smith lied, boys do cry Check out my latest song called Die (Album Version)

lengold	lengold said 866 days ago (July 10th, 2007)
	Alex, you know that I am a fan of your songs and this is no exception. A lot stronger that your last version. You just get better and better. Cheers Len Check out my latest song called Dodgy Doughnut

screamalexz

screamalexz said 866 days ago (July 10th, 2007)

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thanks. it's nice to have fans and feel like people out there can connect. perhaps cuz it feels like someone understands me a little or something. name's chance by the way. alexz is my ex gf that this was written about lol. name was sort of a joke while we were dating and just became a screen name i use a lot.

---
Robert Smith lied, boys do cry

Check out my latest song called Die (Album Version)

peacepiano	peacepiano said 865 days ago (July 10th, 2007)
	Good Sounds good to me. I can hear how this may connect with a live audience. Thanks for sharing this again :) Check out my latest song called I Should Have Known

screamalexz	screamalexz said 865 days ago (July 10th, 2007)
	thanks thanks glad you enjoyed --- Robert Smith lied, boys do cry Check out my latest song called Die (Album Version)

michael2	michael2 said 865 days ago (July 11th, 2007)
	sounds great i like the words, tempo, chords, melody and your vocal delivery (nasal or not). i might try adding a harmony, and maybe a touch of cello on the choruses towards the end (just so it builds a little more), although IMHO less is always more. Check out my latest song called Behind Enemy Lines (w/Bud and Particle Dots)

screamalexz	screamalexz said 865 days ago (July 11th, 2007)
	thanks thanks, selters had added a violin track at one time may put that back into the mix. i wish i had a violin still id do a live violin and not synth --- Robert Smith lied, boys do cry Check out my latest song called Die (Album Version)

michael2	michael2 said 865 days ago (July 11th, 2007)
	you might try the Fitch cello (it's free if you press the media center button on the right top of the page). i like it better than the GB jampack cello (a little grittier). Check out my latest song called Behind Enemy Lines (w/Bud and Particle Dots)

screamalexz	screamalexz said 864 days ago (July 11th, 2007)
	hmm perhaps. i may get some time this week to add more to it, but i just got a show for the first time in a year so i have to make sure i have enough songs and all that stuff first before working on recordings. thanks for listening. --- Robert Smith lied, boys do cry Check out my latest song called Die (Album Version)

michael2	michael2 said 864 days ago (July 11th, 2007)
	cool have fun at your gig. if you want to hear the fitch in action, my LIOLI song on my artists page features it pretty heavily. Check out my latest song called Behind Enemy Lines (w/Bud and Particle Dots)

	said 863 days ago (July 13th, 2007)
	I remember This one that is for sure.... But like "Drakonis" says (look at the first comment) and I have to agree... And one more thing! have you never try to record your guitar and singing in 2 steps, first play the guitar and after you can focus on singing... it's only me thinking..... Take care... Kenta

screamalexz	screamalexz said 863 days ago (July 13th, 2007)
	i did lol i did record the guitar and singing seperate on this one that's why the singing wasn't so great lol. but i dont think ill post another recording of this one on here cuz ive posted it so many times lol. thanks for listening. --- Robert Smith lied, boys do cry Check out my latest song called Die (Album Version)

stacey

stacey said 600 days ago (April 1st, 2008)

How dare she?
You wrote a song for her and she put it down? She's a big dummy. You poured out your heart and I think it's a beautiful song!

If you want some vocal advise, I would say work on your breathing a little so your voice can become richer. You have a great quality to your voice, but it could be fuller. It's there, you just have to bring it out.

I can totally see why this song is a live favorite! I'll bet the girls scream for you!

Rock on, I'm going to check out more of your work now.

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screamalexz

screamalexz said 600 days ago (April 1st, 2008)

thank you
thanks this is an older recording. the breathing issues seem to always happen when i record cuz i have troubles feeling comfortable tho ive tried to fix that issue. it's been a long struggle. seems that certain days i will be perfect singing and others i simply suck lol. perhaps it's something in the air. this is one i plan to redo soon. i'm trying to record a cd and i'm sure i can't leave this one out lol. and yes it was mean of the girl.. that was a messed up time.. i remember being called a "stupid emo ki" and told i should kill myself.. funny thing was it was her who made me even have emotions in the first place.. oh the girl was alexz.. hence the screenname lol

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