song completely. Great sounds even on your vocal. it's exquisite and ideal childrens music. I would imagine all kids would like this musical story. Very professionally done....even the picture is cute, M

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I think I'm not a singer,
so this is kind of a "demo"

I don't think I am an artist
But I believe I am kind of a craftsman
You see?

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What a wonderful piece! I can see a very crude (what I mean by that) an 8-10 fps animation to go along with this piece. The kind that looks like a child created with crayons and sheets of ruffled paper. All packaged into a neat little series.

My only critique is, the last segment for me was little unexpected but still enjoyed it. The vocals imo could stand to be a little louder and clearer. Over all, like Movis said "very professional!"

That's it! Thanks for sharing this one
Patrick

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You're tickling me, guy

The animation!
Is there anybody who wants to create it?

This song is the homage to Michael Franks' "Tiger in the Rain"

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Perhaps it's because I've never out grown adolesence but I love this song! The children's music genre might be appropriate but this song shouldn't be limited to that. This song is full of pleasant textures, melodies and imagination and playfulness.

"I think I'm not a singer" you say but I say that since you sing you are a singer. I have a feeling that the overprocessed vocal is a result of you thinking you are not a singer but I would like to hear the vocals a little clearer. From what I can tell you seem to have a very pleasing voice.

I really enjoyed this song. Poor little wet tiger.

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Thanks, eleveneyes.

Well, then I say
"I am a singer who can't sing well"
Right?

Ah, forget it. Yep, I like singing.
But I always want some other one to sing my song.

And I must say I'm also a wrinkled Peter Pan :D

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and nice tune, very well done on all levels...
You think you are not a singer !! After listening this tune, I do not agree with you...
Thanks to share
Marc

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I can't sing in high notes like when I was young,
That's it.

But I am happy to know you like the song.
So... I thank you

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I am kinda in a good mood today after burning my fingers on my mower. But despite of it all it is tunes like this that put my in a good mood or should I say help me stay that way.

Thanks for sharing

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Ah, how are your fingers now?
It is hard work to play the guitar with burned fingers, I know it well.

I can't heal your burned finger, but,
My song healed your mind, really?
I'm so glad to hear that.

Take care

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so unbury that voice. Yank those effects and raise it in the mix. This is cool and very sweet. I love the changes in the music. My kids would dig this if the words were more accessible. It has a bit of, is it Koji Kodo? the Nintendo composer-god, in the melodic shifts.

If you don't trust your voice, hand it off to one of the cool singers on this site, or somewhere!

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Hi, the Orbiting.
Thanks for your kind comment.

Once I asked some singers to sing my songs,
but most of those attempts failed...
I found then that :
I make songs for ME to sing.
Too bad...

Anyway there are three or four songs in which my friends sing,
Please take a listen, when uploaded.
Thank you.

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I liked the song, but the coda, or ending didn't mean much. It took away from the charm of the first part.

Having said that I still like your arrangement, voice and playing.

Well done.

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>but the coda, or ending didn't mean much
You are right I guess.
The part should have been taken away.

In fact, I thought I posted a version without coda. I made a mistake.
Should I post the right one, or can I update this posting?
I go and check it...

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