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Description:
wrote this song at work last night, this is a quick first recording i figured i'd post it before i take a nap since i work tonight and only got a few hours this morning.. i'm sure there will be rhythem changes and such as the melody and song come together more, seems to work best starting very simple and letting it gradually evolve. sorry it's a little hard to hear since it has a soft vocal part on a lot of it. will probably add more lyrics too.
Lyrics:
it's night's like this
that make me want to die
it never feels alright
and your so far
all i can do is hold on and hope
i'll be ok
why do you have to go
i don't understand
another year goes by
and i wonder why
her skin was soft
and smooth against mine
the hours i spent staring in her eyes i'll never love the same
it's the girl in black who holds my heart tonight
i thought i'd be a lie
it would feel alright for a while
until i fell to the floor
and called out your name
always i call out your name
chorus
tell me why you have to go
tell me so i understand
this lonely year with out you
leaves me broken tonight
Hardware:
fender accoustic, condensor mic, tone port ux2
Software:
cakewalk home studio
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Yet &mdash 07/14/07 - 07:47:06 PM
another beautiful heartfelt song. very moving.
Chance, you really must cheer up for the next one, I know it's hard but why not try? I love these songs but I worry about you.
Cheers
Len
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hehe &mdash 07/14/07 - 08:04:01 PM
meh, can't force a song to sound happy, and even if i were happy it would probably come out sounding sad. maybe if i had my electric fixed and a full band behind me and played one of my songs about the government..
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emotional &mdash 07/15/07 - 09:09:11 PM
Glad to see you back working on your music, Chance! I can really hear your emotions on this song flowing through your fingers and voice. [ Reply to This ]
thanks &mdash 07/16/07 - 07:27:22 AM
thanks, i thought the recording came out sounding a little weak but that was because i was about to pass out and my brain wasn't functioning too much (hadn't slept yet after a midnight shift)
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NOT TOO SHABBY! &mdash 07/24/07 - 10:50:08 AM
mm thanks &mdash 07/24/07 - 11:18:11 AM
thanks. was bound to happen in time. i'd find more to say but ive been working two jobs all week with little sleep and havent slept in 24 hours so my brain is fuzzy lol.
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Chance, you really must cheer up for the next one, I know it's hard but why not try? I love these songs but I worry about you.
Cheers
Len
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