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| stevewhit said 857 days ago (July 19th, 2007) | |
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Hi Roxylee! Many thanks for your understanding and very much valued comments. Steve Check out my latest song called schooldays
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| drakonis said 859 days ago (July 17th, 2007) | |
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given pause... I've been sitting here, staring at the screen now, for minutes after your piece has finished, not knowing quite what to type. This was a very touching, well-written and well-delivered piece of prose... it stirred many very strong, very ambivalent feelings inside me, so I can only say that your thoughts were powerfully conveyed. Very bravely and powerfully written, thank you for sharing, and I am always happy to see the wonders that you create and share... thank you. ttfn, Drakonis Check out my latest song called Lullaby for the Inner Child
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| stevewhit said 857 days ago (July 19th, 2007) | |
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Thanks Eduard! Thanks Eduard. I feel very encouraged and moved by what you have written. Thanks again Eduard. Steve Check out my latest song called schooldays
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| said 859 days ago (July 17th, 2007) | |
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wow! stunning in concept and delivery! my parents are both alcoholics, and is the subject of many a conversation between my brother and i. powerful, very powerful! |
| stevewhit said 857 days ago (July 19th, 2007) | |
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Hi Jason! Many thanks for your comments. I wish you and your brother well. Thanks again Steve Check out my latest song called schooldays
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| Cori Ander said 857 days ago (July 19th, 2007) | |
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A very important song So important! I just cant understand why people, generally speaking, don't see the simple and obvious facts of what happens. If it was understood, then energetic measures would have been taken immediately. Thousands of broken hearts and lives would have been saved. And billions of money. I just cant understand. A very important song! Check out my latest song called Guitar test — Martin CSN (Gerry Tolman Tribute)
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| stevewhit said 857 days ago (July 19th, 2007) | |
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Hi Johannes! Really great to hear from you. Alcohol here in the uk is becomming an even bigger problem especially amongst young people with binge drinking etc. The authorities have a lot to answer for. Also the introduction of 24 hr drinking has made life very difficult for so many families. People really need to listen more but unless they have direct experience of this type of issue they probably don't care. Thanks for your much valued comments Johannes. ps...how about another collab sometime? :-) Best Regards Steve Check out my latest song called schooldays
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| Scott Carmichael said 857 days ago (July 19th, 2007) | |
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Hi Steve The emotional impact of this piece is quite effective, but I have a nit pick... there are places where I can't understand what is being said.. and I don't think you can afford to let one word be waisted here.. I would throw an eq on the voice and pull out any muddy frequencies, then maybe nudge the voice up a hair... sorry... but it's too important to miss after re-reading this I don't want to be critical..keep in mind my ears are pretty beat up at this point in my life Check out my latest song called Good Morning
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| stevewhit said 857 days ago (July 20th, 2007) | |
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Thanks Scott! Hi Scott Many thanks for your constructive comments. I really appreciate what you have had to say and I value your suggestions and encouragement. At some stage I hope to look at doing an updated version and I really do take on board what you suggest. Thanks again Scott Best Regards Steve Check out my latest song called schooldays
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| bud said 856 days ago (July 20th, 2007) | |
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Powerful performance and an all too common story. A friend of mine recently said that in his experience he has come to understand that alcohol is stronger than love - stronger than love itself. That's the only explanation for how it can claim so many lives. I'm especially moved by the ending "there were days when the alcohol didn't own you". Thanks for sharing this. Check out my latest song called eye for you (w/particledots and michael2)
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| said 855 days ago (July 22nd, 2007) | |
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Priceless... ...simply priceless. You took a vital issue and brought it home with conviction. Good to have you back bro... Be well! |
| Moviz said 848 days ago (July 28th, 2007) | |
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Wonderfully performed with great feeling. Not much more I can say, except that I have a real aversion to alcohol after horrible family experiences when I was very young until my teens, so I felt every word. You got it across beautifully, and I love the repeated voice parts, M Check out my latest song called Come Back Billie
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| tbivans said 838 days ago (August 7th, 2007) | |
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Gives me pause, for while I didn't grow up in an alcoholic family, I grew up with parents who strictly forbade it. And I think as a result my brothers and I, in our teenage rebellion, drank heavily. My wife and I both drink, and while I don't think that has destroyed our family, I know that sometimes it affects it, and songs like this force that fact in my face with great clarity. Thanks for posting this. Check out my latest song called Moody Night in the Den
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| saymme said 652 days ago (February 9th, 2008) | |
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I thankYou for this very gripping & POWERFUL song I cannot say anything which hasn't been said Much respect for Your honesty & putting this Out Here courtsey to You / Lena(exzoi) |
| Char said 233 days ago (April 3rd, 2009) | |
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A most powerful message delivered with clarity and wisdom. Thanks. Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)
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Roxylee
Steve, this was personal for me to listen to, as my parents were alcoholics. Talk about memories... I'm glad you turned out good in spite of it all and are back to making music. :-)