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Description:
A boy tries to end his ways of violence in honor of his best friend.
Chorus sung by one of MY best friends Craig
This will be featured on my next album "Harbinger"
Lyrics:
Got a call, from a man the other day
I was lost for words didn't know what to say
Was the first time someone called asking for you
Since the day you decided to turn black n blue
I dunno man, lifes gettin dreary
If you can call it life, sans mon auxiliary
Ive come face to face with the idealist inside
He's startin to die, say goodbye with nowhere to hide
But let's face it I need your guidance now
You're still in my life so there's no need to frown
I got three days a week to live my life
The rest of them I'm putting down my knife
Now I'm starting to notice all the little things
The clouds in the sky and the grass that is green
I'm starting to change, i got nothin to combat
But they don't know that, they don't know about THAT
They say that horses need the wind
Its nip of knowledge their guide to the end
All heroes have a moral to withdraw
They seemed so pure but had one, small, little flaw
You are my painter, you are my conscience
I have my nightmares cuz it just doesn't make sense
They say you're gone like its crystal clear
But I don't buy it cuz my hero, he's still here
Verse 2
Where did the days go I got lost in the moment
I took you for granted you were gone in an instant
I'm not a perfect guy you made me see that
But I'm tryin my best now I can give you that
Broken words are all I can give
But you know I'll try while i still live
And all i know how to do
Is make music and this one's for you
Hardware:
Macbook dual intel
Software:
LP 7.2
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Wow &mdash 07/29/07 - 07:38:04 AM
I LOVE it.... That's all I can say I just LOVE it.
Thanks for sharing this lovely song. Cheers.
Take care
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Kenta [ Reply to This ]
thanks &mdash 07/30/07 - 08:10:10 PM
thanks for your support... it means a lot. glad u enjoyed it cuz thats why i got into this! [ Reply to This ]
Dang... &mdash 07/29/07 - 10:44:40 AM
Nice &mdash 07/30/07 - 08:12:28 PM
I am pretty big right now... but only physically. yeah thatd be cool to get more attention in the music world. i never thought that would happen when i started but now its a dream of mine. thanks for the support...
PS if u get Harbinger... which is gunna be on cdbaby.com u might want to read the who i thank section cuz u MIGHT be in it... hint. [ Reply to This ]
What a breath of ... &mdash 07/30/07 - 09:50:01 PM
... fresh air! DJ... highest points and kudos. All around - a really good, good song. Listen to you parents and keep making music.
Good luck to you... [ Reply to This ]
Ramp to &mdash 08/01/07 - 12:25:37 AM
Great song layout and performance. Snapwhips are a little too bright for my ear. The singing is really good. I'm not as crazy about the rapping...but that's just me. There are some really cool passages that sound like Euro Trance. Lyrics are straightforward but have roots deep in the heart. [ Reply to This ]
thanks homeslice &mdash 08/01/07 - 12:30:22 AM
of course my friend does the singing and everyone loves it. and i rap and i get the bad stuff. haha im just kidding its all good! im glad u liked parts of it. thanks for the commentos! [ Reply to This ]
jaw swing &mdash 08/03/07 - 04:12:38 PM
I'm slow to accepting rapping as an artform. It's not you. You do it as well as the next rapper...or the previous one. Whatever...just jawbonin'. Carry on.
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http://www.hungryforheaven.com/ [ Reply to This ]
Very deep &mdash 08/01/07 - 12:57:21 AM
This is great! The chorus vocals remind me of the speaking in "Six Days" by DJ Shadow. Very unique song that turns out great. This is so deep. It flows so well. You really will be big some day. coolness! [ Reply to This ]
thanks &mdash 08/01/07 - 02:09:34 AM
thanks so much! deep is kinda what i was going for. the vision i had was someone listening to this song late at night while driving on a fall night and feeling the urge to live life to its fullest. thanks for ur support it means a lot. [ Reply to This ]
high marks for this &mdash 08/01/07 - 01:16:08 AM
I'll have to differ with some of the observations. I love the rap part the most actually... Not too crazy about the singing vocals, but still your friend did a great job. Lyrics and melody are quite engaging. Mixing is great. An outstanding song overall. A download for me. [ Reply to This ]
thank you! &mdash 08/01/07 - 02:06:46 AM
i was a little hesitant about adding rapping because the song is pretty gentle and i dont have a lot of experience with vocals. im glad u enjoyed it! it means a lot to me. [ Reply to This ]
dang! &mdash 08/02/07 - 03:02:32 PM
Wow, impressed, I am! Pretty chord progressions -- i love the light touch on the keys. I like the contrast between the verse and chorus; it's unique. Forging your way thru the hip hop tangle and finding a unique approach -- the one that makes people say "wow, I've never heard a song done like that before", will have that lasting impression you're looking for. Very nice. [ Reply to This ]
thanks choas! &mdash 08/02/07 - 09:03:19 PM
thanks for the feedback. im glad people like it even if they dont normally listen to this kind of stuff. or maybe u do? who knows thanks anyways [ Reply to This ]
Very good post Danny &mdash 08/02/07 - 10:19:31 PM
Craig has done your excellent music justice. I've always found rap to be hard to warm to, but this is an exception. Very good lyrics, excellent rapping and the singing's not bad either. Like Leon, the rapping is my preferred part. Excellent work - I'm very impressed.
Neil [ Reply to This ]
ty &mdash 08/02/07 - 10:36:22 PM
love how the music &mdash 08/04/07 - 05:25:53 PM
starts out. Like the two voices of differing what seems cultures. Interesting! Terrific use of percussion, especially the fast rolling percussion. love those haunting sections and how well it goes with the synth.
Lots of melody in this tune that really brings out a nice pop feel! [ Reply to This ]
Being ..... &mdash 08/05/07 - 03:06:20 AM
.. an "old" lady of few words these days .... I have to say .. I LIKE it .... and I am not trimming it out technically or anything .. just sitting here on a Friday nite enjoying my Beer and listening to some tunes .... and this one sounds great to me! I like the contrast between the rap and the sung parts .... DJV ... don't grow up too fast now ! [ Reply to This ]
:) &mdash 08/05/07 - 09:12:06 AM
cant make any guarantee on the growing up part. sorry. but im glad u like it. ive been working on it pretty hard so its nice to get some reassurance cuz when uve heard 200 times (prolly more) like i have... u start to second guess urself. thanks! [ Reply to This ]
wow &mdash 10/29/07 - 10:28:35 AM
thanks &mdash 11/22/07 - 04:18:53 PM
thanks broskie glad to hear you liked it. its my most downloaded song on itunes! [ Reply to This ]
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Thanks for sharing this lovely song. Cheers.
Take care
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Kenta
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