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this friend must be... &mdash 08/15/07 - 11:52:17 PM
,,,very close to you, Ashley...
The lyrics are meaningful, you voice is soulful, the harmonies meld exceptionally well together & I really like the guitar playing, which (I assume) is your playing?
This is really good... :)
What a terrific first submission Ashley!
Welcome to MacJams!
Cheers,
Alf [ Reply to This ]
nice work &mdash 08/16/07 - 12:00:56 AM
great job on vocals, i love the simplicity of the guitar work. it works well !! hope to hear more from you soon [ Reply to This ]
Excellent... &mdash 08/16/07 - 01:10:02 AM
first work on MJ! Welcome and enjoy the community. It's a very beautiful song. [ Reply to This ]
Beautiful &mdash 08/16/07 - 01:51:07 AM
Welcome to Macjams! &mdash 08/16/07 - 11:16:24 AM
very nice, soft, sad longing entrance... often times, simple is effective. This is simple but effective... the guitar is a great backdrop, well played, and your words, singing, harmonies, and pacing, all make for a striking piece of music. Thank you for sharing it with us.
ttfn,
Drakonis [ Reply to This ]
Welcome to MJ... &mdash 08/16/07 - 09:11:19 PM
I really like this song of yours. Great vocal you have here. Your voice and the lyrics captured me immediately. The repetitive guitar really works as it is. It gives a real sense of time passing slowly and missing someone when they're gone.
High marks and looking forward to listening to more of your music. [ Reply to This ]
Wow &mdash 08/16/07 - 09:16:44 PM
powerfull.. the singing set apart the guitar playing kind of carries the listener in and unfolds the lyrics.... great song!!! [ Reply to This ]
Nice Job! &mdash 08/16/07 - 09:29:04 PM
Yeah ... Very Close Friend !!!! &mdash 08/17/07 - 09:53:10 AM
Very nice song, much enjoyed listening, the guitar sounds great and the vocal is much warm and clear.
This is very good start, Welcome To MacJams !
Keep up the good work
Take Care
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Yeman Auf Al-Rawi [ Reply to This ]
Great vox &mdash 08/22/07 - 12:25:59 AM
Nice track, with lovely vocals (kinda a little Alanis-ish). Clean but simple - nice work.
Steve [ Reply to This ]
Thanks! &mdash 08/22/07 - 12:56:03 AM
Thanks everyone for the great comments... Makes me want to keep on singin! [ Reply to This ]
Our... &mdash 08/22/07 - 10:06:55 PM
... pleasure. Very good song.
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soulful song: <a href="http://www.macjams.com/song/32568">Just Go</a>...
It's just music... Dadai [ Reply to This ]
cool words &mdash 08/22/07 - 03:52:48 PM
Lyrics like this are interesting to hear cause it should more of the artist soulful feeling. Like the arpeggios and how they kind a hypnotise.
Thanks for sharing.
WAy to go! [ Reply to This ]
Lovely &mdash 08/22/07 - 11:07:56 PM
Haunting and beautiful. I particularly like the simple guitar line and the vocal harmonies. A really nice introduction to the MacJams community. Thanks for sharing it.:) [ Reply to This ]
Very lovely indeed ... &mdash 08/22/07 - 11:44:25 PM
.. I especially like that "Acoustic" sound on the vocals ... something I am always trying to do myself (but usually just end up using too much reverb) ... welcome to Macjams [ Reply to This ]
ThankYou . . &mdash 08/28/07 - 11:05:40 AM
So Strong . . You express what alot of us have gone or have to go through in the path of Life - & Love !(also the way you/I can feel about MJrs leaving, not knowing why) Touches alot of strings in My Heart
IT*S JUST . . B E A U T I F U L ( 8 8 ) [ Reply to This ]
Beautiful track &mdash 08/28/07 - 08:23:19 PM
this track is a really well done song with only the fact that it is recorded and posted at a really low overall level as a negative.
The point about the level is a minor one that should not discourage you from continuing to record and share your music with us here on MJ and with the rest of the world. You have talent that you need to cultivate and share with the rest of us. [ Reply to This ]
I Like It!! &mdash 08/31/07 - 12:58:53 PM
Wow!! The friend you wrote this song for should really feel special to be considered your friend!! Wish I had friends that moved me to create something so beautiful!! [ Reply to This ]
all gave some some gave all &mdash 10/11/07 - 02:16:06 AM
the song was actually wrote for his funeral. I was lucky enough to have him in my life for even a short time... this was my way of memorializing a wonderful man and an excellent soldier... i was proud to serve with him... [ Reply to This ]
Nice debut! &mdash 09/03/07 - 07:52:36 AM
Great first MJ's song, congratulations. You have a great voice there, very sweet, and some nice b.vox as well.
Looking forward to future submissions,
Cheers,
Phil
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The lyrics are meaningful, you voice is soulful, the harmonies meld exceptionally well together & I really like the guitar playing, which (I assume) is your playing?
This is really good... :)
What a terrific first submission Ashley!
Welcome to MacJams!
Cheers,
Alf
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