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Love the vocal &mdash 08/15/07 - 11:22:34 PM
Nice tune. Loved the vocal and melody. Needs some bass and some of the cymbal hits seemed off a little. Lot of potential here. [ Reply to This ]
Solid Start &mdash 08/16/07 - 12:26:02 AM
Yeah, in addition to badly-needed bass, this tune needs some variety in the drum section... fills, transitions, etc.
But it's a nice, clean vocal and some good guitar work.Just build it from here.
Welcome to MacJams, pablatone. ;)
--- Joe [ Reply to This ]
I like &mdash 08/16/07 - 12:38:14 AM
This is a nice song. It has a lot of potential. Your smooth vocal fits perfectly. With a little more instrumentation this could be killa.
Keep up the good work. If this is your first one, it's nice. [ Reply to This ]
Nice &mdash 08/16/07 - 03:40:41 AM
I agree with the above comments. Great tune but could be worked on a little more. Definately needs bass. You could post in the forum seeing if anyone wants to play bass on the track?
Nice vocal rythm! [ Reply to This ]
post to a forum? &mdash 08/16/07 - 03:15:48 PM
That would be so cool! How do I do that? and can I still mix it? This is all new to me, I can't even get a banner up. [ Reply to This ]
everybody's talkin &mdash 08/16/07 - 04:55:13 AM
cool tune .. a very need for a bass here
and more dynamic with the drums pattern
very nice guitar work ..keep them comin !!
p.s
what kind of guitar your are playin with ??
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guitar &mdash 08/17/07 - 04:59:04 PM
i got an ibanez artcore hollowbody, i love it. i think it's on the middle postion for the rythm and bridge for the lead.
I've done a bit of recording over the years, I started with a Fostex X-15 (i think) 4 track cassette recorder, the I got this tascam 388 7" reel mixer/recorder. the thing was the size of a coffee table and weighed 80 lbs, after that I got a Fostex digital 8 track, and now I have an imac w/logic express. i'm about 2 months into it and walk away everynight feeling like somebody just handed me the universe. This thing is just crazy. [ Reply to This ]
This is a really &mdash 08/16/07 - 07:29:46 AM
catchy song, sung and played extremely well. The production is also first class and crisp. It obviously could use some bass on it, but otherwise very enjoyable and downloaded. Thanks.
Cheers
Len
PS: Welcome to Macjams [ Reply to This ]
Summery Groove &mdash 08/16/07 - 09:20:24 AM
...love the August-lazy guitar loping along, with the relaxed, comfy voice just grooving along. Yeah, a cracking baseline and some varied drum fills would carry this into the 'killer' zone - but that can come with time. What a debut! Welcome to MacJams! [ Reply to This ]
you couls hear that?!! &mdash 08/17/07 - 07:46:40 PM
Boy, you hit that one right on the head. it was about 104 in here.
It really helps keep my vocal cords loose though.
BTW if you ever need to sing a bass part- do it 1st thing in the morning before coffee or anything, or wait till you catch a cold. ;)
You could try to get a cold I guess but that's just crazy. [ Reply to This ]
Thanks &mdash 08/16/07 - 03:25:51 PM
Thanks guys, yeah all critiques are spot on.
Who wants to play bass?
It is definately in the ruff stages right now, I was just so excited I had a premature debarcation.
ok, that's only marginally funny. [ Reply to This ]
Keep Up The Good Work ! &mdash 08/16/07 - 04:10:16 PM
Very nice song, the guitar sounds very good, much enjoyed listening to this piece, really needs bass but beautifully played and arranged, Welcome to MacJams !
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thank you &mdash 08/17/07 - 05:02:19 PM
This is kickin &mdash 08/17/07 - 04:38:31 PM
I... &mdash 08/18/07 - 09:33:59 AM
comply with all the other constructive comments and I still love it. Love your smoooooth vocal and that guitar, cheers M [ Reply to This ]
cool tune! &mdash 08/18/07 - 11:20:54 AM
welcome to macjams by the way!
i like the tune, and that guitar is killer.
mayber the rhythm is too loud? it seems like it is red lining a bit.
but i REALLY loke this song!
kudos! [ Reply to This ]
could be &mdash 08/18/07 - 11:28:43 AM
yeah it's a very ruff take, but dang was it fun! logic express and loops- whoo-wee I'll be goin' deep and stayin long. [ Reply to This ]
Downloaded &mdash 08/24/07 - 02:33:25 AM
wow cool soul funk blues song man . Keep postin and Ill keep listenin man ...thanx for sharing ! [ Reply to This ]
Way Cool &mdash 01/31/08 - 01:06:58 AM
Rythmn guitar reminded me of Grand Funk a bit. Love the Artcores. No bass didn't bother me any could here some in my head anyway. Reminds me of a song I heard in Altadina California years ago in the gym at a holloween party. The guy playing guitar looked and sounded alot like you :) Sweet solos with a smooth tone. I know a bass player you could probably get to do this with. The Doc. Mr Double D. [ Reply to This ]
Awrite!! &mdash 01/31/08 - 07:16:54 PM
love it as it is &mdash 04/22/08 - 07:57:49 PM
This simplicity makes it unique. Pure vocals, bare guitars, basic pulse. The pure spirit of blues rock ! _loaded. Thanks for it ! [ Reply to This ]
Everybody's talkin &mdash 05/07/08 - 05:48:18 AM
Pablatone You Rock!! I love your voice on this too.
I love listening to first uploads LoL
Peace Dee xx [ Reply to This ]
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