I really like this. Very dynamic and well put together! Russian women have sexy voices. Nice job all around.

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THanks! Indeed they do. I found out this one's like 63 though....

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You need some more exposure here at MJ's,or maybe you don't.More people need to hear your fine song crafting and in my humble opinion excellent tracks.This is awesome stuff.Another instant fav!

Blessings,

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Thanks for your support Godchaser!

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This belongs on a CD heard by millions!

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cheers. perhaps someday!

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Really liked the approach; just not enough of this stuff around.

That said, I'm a picky sod (someone has to be now Ik's gone)

First, you should be aware that this is playing back at a very low volume.

I kept on wanting it to burst into song; I think you might have a hit on your hands if you found a silly, simple chorus.

The vocal should be mixed higher.

The lady telling the story does not yet have a full grasp of the dramatic gesture in the English language (I suspect she's got it in Russian just fine), and as a result, I found myself going 'Huh?' a couple of times

If you're going to insist on such a long intro, then it needs (way) more melodic interest - somethiing you don't break out 'til the very end

A very good basis for developing something that could be quite wonderful.

Cheers, Shaky

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Everything you've suggested is right on. This one was more of an experiment for me in that I had this idea and quickly rushed to get it out. I'll definitely be reworking it at some point as it does have some charm.
I appreciate your comments. Feel free to make suggestions for my other stuff too. You've said some very helpful things!

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