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This Course of Treatment Might Be Expensive


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The story of Sarah Perry and Karma, as told by a Russian woman.
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Uploaded: Aug 18, 2007 - 03:02:46 AM
Last Updated: Feb 12, 2008 - 04:35:28 PM Last Played: Apr 02, 2017 - 11:35:23 PM
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Axgrinder said 3594 days ago (August 25th, 2007)
Right on!
I really like this. Very dynamic and well put together! Russian women have sexy voices. Nice job all around.
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rsorensen said 3435 days ago (January 30th, 2008)
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THanks! Indeed they do. I found out this one's like 63 though....
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Godchaser said 3524 days ago (November 3rd, 2007)
Nice stuff
You need some more exposure here at MJ's,or maybe you don't.More people need to hear your fine song crafting and in my humble opinion excellent tracks.This is awesome stuff.Another instant fav!

Blessings,
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rsorensen said 3435 days ago (January 30th, 2008)
wow
Thanks for your support Godchaser!
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Heightened said 3482 days ago (December 14th, 2007)
This Course of Treatment Might Be Expensive
This belongs on a CD heard by millions!
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rsorensen said 3435 days ago (January 30th, 2008)
hah!
cheers. perhaps someday!
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rover101 said 3448 days ago (January 18th, 2008)
Rather fine
Really liked the approach; just not enough of this stuff around.

That said, I'm a picky sod (someone has to be now Ik's gone)

First, you should be aware that this is playing back at a very low volume.

I kept on wanting it to burst into song; I think you might have a hit on your hands if you found a silly, simple chorus.

The vocal should be mixed higher.

The lady telling the story does not yet have a full grasp of the dramatic gesture in the English language (I suspect she's got it in Russian just fine), and as a result, I found myself going 'Huh?' a couple of times

If you're going to insist on such a long intro, then it needs (way) more melodic interest - somethiing you don't break out 'til the very end

A very good basis for developing something that could be quite wonderful.

Cheers, Shaky
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rsorensen said 3435 days ago (January 30th, 2008)
Picky's fine with me
Everything you've suggested is right on. This one was more of an experiment for me in that I had this idea and quickly rushed to get it out. I'll definitely be reworking it at some point as it does have some charm.
I appreciate your comments. Feel free to make suggestions for my other stuff too. You've said some very helpful things!
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