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just added a guitar into the mix and an intro for those that don't like quick starts lol.. enjoy

must be a fathers day theme lol cos i wrote this for my old man too lol saying i'm alive despite the hell u put me thru.... heres what i got anyways, i think its pretty good being modest ofcourse, tho i do surprise myself with the songs i come out with being a self taugh t very unproffessional and maybe unorthodox muso hehe finally got some bass in my music too for all those wanting me to add basslines, thiink it does make a pretty big difference. thanks guys 4 ur advice, will update my other songs with bass too soon
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Lyrics
verse1
break me, hate me,take me, make me nothing like you always do
you make me feel like i'm worthless
in your eyes and view,
i know i don't need you,i don't need you to survive, don't need you in my life,


break me, hate me, take me, make me nothing like u always do,
rape me, break me down, u don't need nothing with u,
i don't need this, yes i don't need u in my life, to survive, i know i'll make soemthing of my life.

ch

i'm alive, i'm alive,
i don't need you in my life,

verse 2

so this is goodbye and i'm sick of
all your god dam lies,
i'm sick of being put down by the words u speak inside my mind,
i'm tired of the lies, i'm tired of the lies, that were spoke to me when i was just a child.
walk away, i'll walk away from all the shit,that you, you
you're so fuken selfish that you don't even care the things that you made me do,
you break me down again, you broke my heart again and i'm so sick and tired i am gonna say goodbye yeah..

ch

i'm alive, i'm alive,
without you by my side i'm alive,
i'm alive,
without you by my side i'm alive,
i'm alive,
without you by my side i'm alive.



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Uploaded: Sep 12, 2007 - 04:22:02 AM
Last Updated: Sep 13, 2007 - 05:15:56 AM Last Played: Nov 10, 2009 - 11:51:21 AM
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Axgrinder said 806 days ago (September 12th, 2007)
Whoa!
I didn't say I didn't like the start bro! I will say that this version seems smoother and as far as your levels go.... sounds pretty good to me man. I believe you gained a tighter production on this round so don't be cussing that studio to hard! Although if the truth be known, I cuss the ever livin shit out of logic daily but then I'm sure most of it is user related! ;-P Nice work on the remix my friend.

Alvin
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nevermine said 806 days ago (September 12th, 2007)
hey

hey bro, not pickin on u with them comments lol, other people in the past have wanted a bit more of an intro so i thought i'd try it and i just deleted them comments anyways lol i think, can't remember, anyways good to hear someone else is harsh about their music too haha and ty for ur feedback, ur a legend like always, u were quick to comment again too... thanks flash hehe

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said 806 days ago (September 12th, 2007)
Without you by my side I am nothing
Oh! sorry I mean my wife... But I see what you mean:) I like the lyrics :) I know hove it can be I had a hell with my father when I try to grow up... Nice beats great music & lyrics.

Take care
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Kenta
nevermine said 806 days ago (September 12th, 2007)
wellll
okay lol.. not sure where u were going with the start of that but glad u could relate!! i wanted to create something that isn't spoken about much and cos i went thru it too i thought well i'm the perfect spokesman hehe well singerman lmao.. anwyays thanks for ur comment!

ciao


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lengold said 805 days ago (September 13th, 2007)
Really
like this song - great beats and lyrics. The echo on the vocals seemed a bit much at first but then grew on me.
Not sure if I like the synth sound (I think it's a sound that has been over used by others) - maybe try piano sound instead? But overall excellent.
Cheers
Len


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nevermine said 798 days ago (September 20th, 2007)
hey thanks len
good to get different ideas cos i'm keen to try new things, only prob is i got a cheap keyboard so piano sounds a bit dodgey but mite be able to sparkle it on the studio, wanna give me a new one haha but yes i might try ur idea when i get a chance anways, good to get a few different mixes hey:) ty and ty 4 ur comments

geoff



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lavalamp said 798 days ago (September 20th, 2007)
Making waves
I see you all over the forums lately making waves. Dig the new intro. As I stated before, love the song.
I get this all the time: Put the vocals up a bit, don't mix with headphones, that's what I always hear and I think my production is getting better as a result of the comments. That's what the comments are all about.
My opinion put the synths down a little.
You've got a lot of talent, dude.
BTW, I'm from San Francisco.
Dave
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nevermine said 798 days ago (September 20th, 2007)
hey dave aka LL hehe
ur such a fuken legend Dave hehe ooops swore 'again' but u r really and very talented too even with the gift of accepting other peoples advice and critics which i am learning to do now too so thankyou for your advice about the keys cos it is so hard to get levels right thru ear bud headphones haha so ur help is greatly appreciated.. thanks again for ur encouragement too, really means alot hey and btw haha about ur adress, u were supposed to post it 4 the sake of stars lmfao lol....btw i think i have lost the mix for this song now hmmm but if so i will re record it all one day and get the synth levels better....

geoff

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EZamor said 796 days ago (September 21st, 2007)
like it!
nice work, man. my only complaint is that the mix could be a bit more dynamic, particularly the vocals. maybe you could just run it through some equalizing software?
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nevermine said 795 days ago (September 22nd, 2007)
thanks man
yeah one thing i didn't do was master the vox and mix but i will get onto it asap , thanku

geoff

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