Her Startled Return [Instrumental]

EZamor

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I like how this one is coming along, but it doesn't quite seem finished to me. If anyone would like to remix or add vocals, please message me.

Cheerz,
-=ez

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Short poem by Char:

Girl, I can't tell you why,
But still I wanted to try.
I had to let you go
Because you wanted it so.
You knew where you were going
And you had to go there alone.
I couldn't change that, knowing
That my heart would turn to stone.

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Hits: 894
Comments: 17
Fans: 7
Plays: 253
Downloads: 78
Votes: 5
Uploaded: Sep 15, 2007 - 04:31:07 PM
Last Updated: Nov 19, 2008 - 03:51:23 PM Last Played: Nov 24, 2009 - 09:08:53 AM

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perceptualvortex	perceptualvortex said 802 days ago (September 15th, 2007)
	Yeah I like how it's coming along too. The organ and the grainy atmosphere are great. This would be really good backing for lead keys or guitar. Check out my latest song called Machine Man (w Beastie Boys)

spitlogic	spitlogic said 801 days ago (September 16th, 2007)
	missing? Im not sure I can tell you whats missing. I think the jam is well made and pretty full. Your percussion suits the melody quite well. It may need some sort of lyrics to it, but aside from that I think it is a well made jam. Check out my latest song called Guillotine

Feter	Feter said 801 days ago (September 16th, 2007)
	Her Startled Return nice theme ..wonder how it will turn with singin voice ..! what do you think ? Check out my latest song called A Night With Feter feat'(Roxylee sloparts crissew johnwhitehead and Yamin AL Yamani )

craft	craft said 801 days ago (September 16th, 2007)
	cool darky composition you have here... Some female vocals could be nice... Ask Jo Thorpe or onesweetworld.. Well done as always.. If you need a little bit of rap hit me Check out my latest song called Blue Lights (feat. Spleenveil)

EZamor	EZamor said 795 days ago (September 21st, 2007)
	oh thanks! thanks for the tip, i'll check it out! and actually, i'd love to have rap on some of my tracks. but i'm not confident that my beats are strong enough. what do u think? Check out my latest song called Peace (One Drop in the Blue) (w/ LunaTrick)

alexweiler	alexweiler said 800 days ago (September 17th, 2007)
	returned hi ez, good to have you back. a fine, dark piece so far ... all that's missing are vocals. but this problem should easily be fixed !? Check out my latest song called Roaming (Heavy Remix)

EZamor	EZamor said 795 days ago (September 21st, 2007)
	thanks alex. hey thanks. and too bad our collab never quite took off. wanna try again (maybe without crystal, since we couldn't get those problems sorted out). cheerz, -=ez Check out my latest song called Peace (One Drop in the Blue) (w/ LunaTrick)

alexweiler	alexweiler said 710 days ago (December 16th, 2007)
	collab Hey ez, sorry I didn't have noticed your reply before. Meanwhile i switched to Logic Pro, but this should be no obstacle, since i still have an (outdated) version of GB. Surely one day we will come togehter, again! Check out my latest song called Roaming (Heavy Remix)

drakonis

drakonis said 800 days ago (September 17th, 2007)

Great piece, does need a tweak...
I really like this, and it does need a little work, but it could become a monster of a chillout darkwave tune if you do it. I like your choices of synths (especially the backward-sounding fx) and the changes between sections. However, the main problem to my ears is the drum loop is too regular and even through the piece, it keeps it from going anywhere. I would have a minimal drum loop for the beginning, then one that sounds bigger and emphasizes the main beat more for the chorus, then back.. then add some for following sections, then fade out for the end. Very cool stuff!
ttfn,
Drakonis

Check out my latest song called Lullaby for the Inner Child

*itiswotitis*	*itiswotitis* said 796 days ago (September 21st, 2007)
	nice moody feel to this...hmm vocals u say..... Check out my latest song called WALKING BASS IN THE CLOUDS

EZamor	EZamor said 795 days ago (September 21st, 2007)
	yes, a lovely female vocal, perhaps? oh, don't tease! ;) and thanks for the compliment Check out my latest song called Peace (One Drop in the Blue) (w/ LunaTrick)

	said 796 days ago (September 21st, 2007)
	yes Dont know why but this made me crack open a canvas and start painting thanks!!!!!

EZamor	EZamor said 795 days ago (September 21st, 2007)
	thanks hopefully a fellow macjammer will record a nice lead to this. Check out my latest song called Peace (One Drop in the Blue) (w/ LunaTrick)

	Richard_Schletty said 342 days ago (December 17th, 2008)
	shrill, ominous or exotic Shrill on-ramp. Please adjust frequencies. Or is it a bad set of headphones? Starts to say something interesting but slightly ominous or exotic at 1:48. Check out my latest song called The Quarry (part 4) - words by Pope John Paul II (Karol Wojtyla)

segiperkasa	segiperkasa said 40 days ago (October 16th, 2009)
	really cool musci really cool music you have here Check out my latest song called Sepiroth Strings of Fire Symphony

segiperkasa	segiperkasa said 40 days ago (October 16th, 2009)
	really cool musci really cool music you have here Check out my latest song called Sepiroth Strings of Fire Symphony

egobandit	egobandit said 40 days ago (October 16th, 2009)
	I like it just the way it is, very laid back but ruff and emotional at the same time. I enjoyed it about 2: 11 when the drums lift up it makes my feet move thanks I enjoyed this! Check out my latest song called when its love

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Name: eZamor.

I do desktop music. Most of my recordings come out of a 2 x 6.5 x 6.5 box. Here's a list of my MacJam Collaborations and Remixes: ...with LunaTrick - Don't Fade Away ...with Moses & Char - The Flight of Phoebe ...with Craft - Na... [see more]

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