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Her Startled Return by EZamor [Email]

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Comments: 13
Votes: 5
Plays: 188
Last Played: Oct 12, 2008 - 02:12:45 PM
Downloads: 50
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Uploaded: Sep 15, 2007 - 04:31:07 PM
Last Updated: Sep 13, 2008 - 05:51:56 PM
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Description:
I like how this one is coming along, but it doesn't quite seem finished to me. If anyone would like to remix or add vocals, please message me.

Cheerz,
-=ez

Lyrics:
Short poem by Char:

Girl, I can't tell you why,
But still I wanted to try.
I had to let you go
Because you wanted it so.
You knew where you were going
And you had to go there alone.
I couldn't change that, knowing
That my heart would turn to stone.

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Yeah &mdash 09/15/07 - 07:30:05 PM
I like how it's coming along too. The organ and the grainy atmosphere are great. This would be really good backing for lead keys or guitar.

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missing? &mdash 09/16/07 - 06:52:15 AM
Im not sure I can tell you whats missing. I think the jam is well made and pretty full. Your percussion suits the melody quite well. It may need some sort of lyrics to it, but aside from that I think it is a well made jam.

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Her Startled Return &mdash 09/16/07 - 03:03:46 PM
nice theme ..wonder how it will turn with
singin voice ..! what do you think ?

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cool &mdash 09/16/07 - 04:01:19 PM
darky composition you have here... Some female vocals could be nice... Ask Jo Thorpe or onesweetworld.. Well done as always.. If you need a little bit of rap hit me

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oh thanks! &mdash 09/21/07 - 09:13:56 PM
thanks for the tip, i'll check it out! and actually, i'd love to have rap on some of my tracks. but i'm not confident that my beats are strong enough. what do u think?

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returned &mdash 09/17/07 - 06:24:45 AM
hi ez, good to have you back. a fine, dark piece so far ... all that's missing are vocals. but this problem should easily be fixed !?

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thanks alex. &mdash 09/21/07 - 09:23:48 PM
hey thanks. and too bad our collab never quite took off. wanna try again (maybe without crystal, since we couldn't get those problems sorted out).

cheerz,
-=ez

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collab &mdash 12/16/07 - 08:24:07 AM
Hey ez, sorry I didn't have noticed your reply before. Meanwhile i switched to Logic Pro, but this should be no obstacle, since i still have an (outdated) version of GB. Surely one day we will come togehter, again!

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Great piece, does need a tweak... &mdash 09/17/07 - 11:34:30 AM
I really like this, and it does need a little work, but it could become a monster of a chillout darkwave tune if you do it. I like your choices of synths (especially the backward-sounding fx) and the changes between sections. However, the main problem to my ears is the drum loop is too regular and even through the piece, it keeps it from going anywhere. I would have a minimal drum loop for the beginning, then one that sounds bigger and emphasizes the main beat more for the chorus, then back.. then add some for following sections, then fade out for the end. Very cool stuff!
ttfn,
Drakonis

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nice moody &mdash 09/21/07 - 07:40:37 PM
feel to this...hmm vocals u say.....

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yes, a lovely female vocal, perhaps? &mdash 09/21/07 - 09:11:28 PM
oh, don't tease! ;) and thanks for the compliment

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yes &mdash 09/21/07 - 07:43:54 PM
Dont know why but this made me crack open a canvas and start painting thanks!!!!!

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thanks &mdash 09/21/07 - 09:07:59 PM
hopefully a fellow macjammer will record a nice lead to this.

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