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this is totally killing me; i usually just make up things as I go along and for some reason this time i can't do it. i can't seem to come up with a vocal melody that sounds right with my voice for this one (i was picturing a shoegaze version of Cat Power or Low).

if you want to have a go at it, feel free. this is a rough mix, I left the gtr sounds going for awhile at the end in case someone wants to mess with them as well.

here are the files if you want them:
http://s2.massmirror.com/98cf6b22a138ff5d9451415a71615637.html

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Song Stats

Hits: 1303
Comments: 26
Fans: 15
Plays: 225
Downloads: 120
Votes: 8
Uploaded: Sep 19, 2007 - 05:36:32 PM
Last Updated: Sep 19, 2007 - 06:39:48 PM Last Played: Nov 22, 2009 - 04:42:36 PM

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Hardware:

intel mini mac, line6 pocket pod, iMic, m-audio midi keyboard, Ibanez archtop gtr

Software:

GB3, the bell sounds are from jampack4, the rest are reall instruments or from jampack 1

Comments

	said 797 days ago (September 19th, 2007)
	Hmmmm This so out of my league and genre. That i wish i could you for those files. Still messing around with you breathe god. So...But still. Nice tune to fall asleep to. That is a compliment, btw;-). Good melodic layering and nice guitar playing! l & R Jb

Feter	Feter said 797 days ago (September 19th, 2007)
	unfinished Wo ...I can see a real groovey song can get out of this song bed ...some slide guitar will be perfect for it ...! please keep us updated for any futher versions .. good luck ! Check out my latest song called A Night With Feter feat'(Roxylee sloparts crissew johnwhitehead and Yamin AL Yamani )

	said 797 days ago (September 19th, 2007)
	WHoa THis needs some lyrics and its golden! Ill try to take a crack at it... Excellent some much can come from this well arranged musical bed!

Mystified	Mystified said 797 days ago (September 19th, 2007)
	Nice... I hear similarities to Mojave 3 in this, yet unique... Check out my latest song called For the Beauty of the Earth

bud	bud said 797 days ago (September 19th, 2007)
	Yum I'm in love with an unfinished track just wish I had some free time right now - but time is tight. Darn this is purty. Check out my latest song called try not to think

dolby	dolby said 797 days ago (September 19th, 2007)
	Hmmm.... ...this is great. Not unlike stuff I'm working on at the moment - Will download and see if anything happens. Phil Check out my latest song called You Can't Win Them All

BuddyEarl	BuddyEarl said 797 days ago (September 20th, 2007)
	hmmmm I tried to download but failed, this is a sweet song

davisamerica	davisamerica said 797 days ago (September 20th, 2007)
	lovely kinda a pink floyd guitar in there. this song is structured for a great conclusion.are you sure you've given yourself enough time. birth is difficult. i love this piece. Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

michael2	michael2 said 796 days ago (September 20th, 2007)
	really? not sure why it wouldn't work for you. try it again, you just click one of the links on the right and it just starts right up. sometimes those free upload services act up a bit, but they always work in the end. Check out my latest song called Behind Enemy Lines (w/Bud and Particle Dots)

lengold	lengold said 797 days ago (September 20th, 2007)
	Lovely relaxing soundbed - I agree with Davisamerica. I am sure that you will come up with something great to finish it off. Cheers Len Check out my latest song called Dodgy Doughnut

echoroom	echoroom said 797 days ago (September 20th, 2007)
	A wonderful piece .. ... michael.... I'm jammed at present, but may see if i can help out here ... send me your e-mail address. steve Check out my latest song called Deeper (w/t Racerat)

	said 796 days ago (September 20th, 2007)
	WoW ! WOW Micheal, this is as Davis said, has from Pink Floyd's musics and this will sound great GREAT GREAT in the new version (take) .. Just add some acoustics and solos and it'll works beautifully !! This is just great Well Done !

Vic Holman	Vic Holman said 796 days ago (September 20th, 2007)
	you? huh? wha? no words? say it ain't so joe!....as I type this out trying to figure out words for my own song. Isn't that the way. Such a great piece of the sky here. quite lovely. Check out my latest song called November

Alannah	Alannah said 795 days ago (September 21st, 2007)
	See now ... ... I'm kinda hearing a Chris Isaak kinda thing going on .... but then again .. this could be right up my own alley .... gonna save it (today I have a horrible head cold and nothing but frog croaks are coming out) .... Check out my latest song called I'm Drownin' - Smokey VW (feat Alannah) + Outtaorbit

Diviner	Diviner said 794 days ago (September 23rd, 2007)
	Nice This is a really good chilled track, that really does not need lyrics. Lovely guitar sounds drifting over a nice melody and a relaxing beat. Great track. Check out my latest song called Space Program (Space Race 2009)

Nolan	Nolan said 791 days ago (September 25th, 2007)
	A poignant journey That's the "vibe" I get from this. I love it. Some great chord changes and a nice simple yet interesting and classy arrangement. It's definitely on its way somewhere good. Check out my latest song called Fine

rainfice	rainfice said 787 days ago (September 30th, 2007)
	Cloudless I'm listening to this, completely lost in it, and I scroll to the top of the page to find that it's only about half over. This pleases me greatly. As pretty much everyone has said, this is a fantastic place to build from. I wouldn't mind taking a run at it. Check out my latest song called Moment

michael2	michael2 said 787 days ago (September 30th, 2007)
	hey buddy good to hear from you. go nuts, there is a link for the GB files at the top of the post. do what you want and post away (no need to get my approval - i'm just curious as to what folks will do to it). Check out my latest song called Behind Enemy Lines (w/Bud and Particle Dots)

davisamerica	davisamerica said 784 days ago (October 2nd, 2007)
	hello michael2! Excellent collab. with mike. Your sense of melodies is amazing. The song is carried by that wonderful road to travel on. A hudge fan! Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

davisamerica	davisamerica said 784 days ago (October 2nd, 2007)
	hello michael2! Excellent collab. with mike. Your sense of melodies is amazing. The song is carried by that wonderful road to travel on. A hudge fan! Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

Doug Somers	Doug Somers said 784 days ago (October 2nd, 2007)
	Beautiful and so easy to hear...late afternoon sunbeams through a west facing window. I also love the collab with Mike and now understand the strong sense of your piece that moved him to play. Thanks! Doug Check out my latest song called Desiree (MJ Space Race 2009)

Heightened	Heightened said 732 days ago (November 24th, 2007)
	unfinished Song sounds great as it is but vocals would be nice. If I didn't sing like a cat being neutered I would give it a shot. Check out my latest song called A Journey Through Starburst Galaxy M82

michael2	michael2 said 731 days ago (November 24th, 2007)
	i actually did get around to finishing it. it's called Mountain now, and there are a bunch of different versions floating around by different MJers as well as myself. you can still play with it of you like though. thanks for checking out the back catalog. Check out my latest song called Behind Enemy Lines (w/Bud and Particle Dots)

five_extra_arms	five_extra_arms said 698 days ago (December 27th, 2007)
	They Never Fell In Love Michael, thanks for letting us work with this great song. My version with estellie is here: They Never Fell In Love Bob Check out my latest song called Michael Pool

dajama	dajama said 698 days ago (December 27th, 2007)
	Very nice I've just finished listening to five-extra-arms and estellie's take on this, and it is awesome. This is excellent, also in its own right, and I can see how people have seen such potential for other things in it. You are a creative spring. Nice work. Peace. Check out my latest song called Across the Wire (MJRF)

Estella	Estella said 692 days ago (January 2nd, 2008)
	michael I hadn't heard this for some reason--only Bob's version, but now that I've heard it, I see how gorgeous this is! No wonder it came out so well in the end. Thanks for this. The guitar alone at the end I could listen to forever, like whales in meditation :p I mean that as a compliment. but what a composition! Check out my latest song called Este Momento

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Name: michael2

I'm a guy who never wanted to do anything but play music. I grew up with classic rock and prog rock before discovering punk and the new york dolls once I got to high school. As i got a little older (and less angry), I developed a love o... [see more]

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