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watch you die (with bass as requested)


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nevermine

 Genre: Rock
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i like the added bass, thanks guys for ur advice ;) check the other version for history!!
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Lyrics
i've been mistreated by u, i'm sick of all ur god dam lies
and now i'll say it to you, you're nothing but a fuken lie,
you say you wanted to be me and you want it more than life
i'll watch u slowly die now
i'll watch u fall apart inside

chorus

i'll watch u as u fall apart inside
i'll watch u as u slowly die inside

verse 2

so this is my goodbye to all ur fuken lies
you said that we could be more than anything yeah
but i know that everything that u said to me, its all a god dam lie
no more no more no more
this is my final goodbye

chorus

i'll watch u as you slowly die inside
i'll watch u as you fall apart inside
i'll watch u as you fall apart inside

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Hits: 573
Comments: 9
Fans: 2
Plays: 79
Downloads: 42
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Uploaded: Sep 20, 2007 - 03:31:06 AM
Last Updated: Sep 20, 2007 - 03:31:06 AM Last Played: Oct 25, 2009 - 06:09:18 AM
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alfalpha said 794 days ago (September 20th, 2007)
yup....
there's somthing in this.....i reminds me of Killing Joke- one of my favourite '80's bands......

erm...without sounding like an ass (or a prude)- you might need to mention 'explicit' lyrics in your upload options- it doesn't bother me, but there may be some other MacJammers which may 'object' to this 'little 'f' word...) -ah well, I enjoyed anyway! ;)


Well done & Thanks, great tune!

Cheers,
Alf
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nevermine said 794 days ago (September 20th, 2007)
the little 'f' word hehe
i kinda did it on purpose and more people seem to have listened now and been subjected to the two little f's in the song haha i'm bad i know but i don't want the perfect ones missin out on my fury hehe, well it's not that bad lol
i'm glad u enjoyed it anyways and thanks for your comment mr alfalfa:)really wasn't sure bout the bass i added but u gave me the green light so thanks!! think u should have been brussells cos they're yummier but still suppose ur green anyways lol

ciao mate!!!

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lengold said 794 days ago (September 20th, 2007)
Very
emotional and real lyrics that are backed with honest music. The song does its job well. Hope its an old emotion thats now gone.
Cheers
Len


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nevermine said 794 days ago (September 20th, 2007)
hey lenny baby!!
yeah i think it's gone now, well my rhythm guitarist is no longer in my life and he got what he wanted ie lead singer of our last band and i am still doin my music and singing so i guess we both win but i just wanted to wish him well with this song hehe but now i kinda regret even givin him the honor if u can call it that of having a song written for him tho i think i wrote it more for myself to let go of the hurt. anyways thanks for listening, nice to have the support from the few hehe

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lengold said 794 days ago (September 20th, 2007)
Rhythm guitarist
And there's me thinking it must have been a woman - hilarious!


Cheers
Len



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bonnieprincejohnny said 794 days ago (September 20th, 2007)
Fuken - I would pronounce as 'fooken'
Great track good chord changes, kinda shambolic but ... hey that's charming - easy. Be fucking lucky.
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nevermine said 792 days ago (September 21st, 2007)
shambolic?
think ur a bit too educated for me hehe wheres that dam dictionary :) hey thanks for ur comment and fooken rock on ;)
geoff


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Axgrinder said 792 days ago (September 21st, 2007)
Right arm!
We have a dump truck full of potential here! The bass really fills in the holes man. This is a solid tune. THIS IS EXPLICIT? How offensive!!! My ears are now tainted and my hearing shall never be the same F-U-C-K. Nice work at any rate brother.

Ax
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nevermine said 791 days ago (September 22nd, 2007)
wow!!!
thanks man, what can i say, bit speechless and really inspired by your comment and laughing as well by your humour!! good to see people on here that don't get offended by a word hehe... rock on ;)

geoff


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