Very nice singing voice, intriguing lyrics, and enjoyable music. I assume you are doing this in one take... if you record the guitar once, then sing on a separate track, you can start twiddling stuff, like move the guitar off to the side a little so it doesn't "sit on your voice", and you can boost the bass a little so its not so thin. Also, the volume needs to be boosted a little, but these are minor tweaks... good stuff!
ttfn,
Drakonis

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thanks for listening. Yeah I know it could be a better recording but to be honest I find it easier to play and sing at the same time.
Thanks again for taking the time to listen and comment.

HA!

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Lovely song, lovely voice.
Welcome to Macjams.
Cheers
Len

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Thanks Len. Everyone is being very friendly and welcoming. Thanks for listening. Glad you enjoyed.

HA!

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Wonderful Song, the vocal is really nice and the guitar chords in the background .. I Like it !
Very Nice Post and Welcome To MacJams !

Take Care
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Yeman Auf Al-Rawi

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Thanks for your comments. Stay well.

HA!

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a really nice voice. The recording is a little bit lacking but the song is really good.

Welcome to MacJams

Peter

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voice ... lovely song!

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Incredible singin , I love this kind of songs
reminds me music is wonderfull with simplicity
and the real art is the singer him/herself ..
and the real pickin if its piano or guitar ect !
fine song and lyrics here ..enjoyed very much !
Kudos !

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I'm really enjoying your stuff and find it refreshing. I read that you record the singing and guitar at the same time. I mean it's more comfortable doing this for most of us, but I think you should try it seperately just for production sake.
Glad you have joined us here.
Dave

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