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| EZamor said 792 days ago (September 21st, 2007) | |
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lead thanks for the feedback. i actually wrote this one from the (unrecorded) lead, then filled everything else in around it. the lead, in my mind, is pretty similar to the (fake) guitar solo. the chorus (i guess, or rather the parts that correspond to the arpeggio at the start), is more intense, and the quiet bit after the solo...i imagined as being spoken word or with lotsa vocal harmonies (couldn't decide). but i'm not very good on recording keys, so i didn't include my version of the lead melody. Check out my latest song called Peace (One Drop in the Blue) (w/ LunaTrick)
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| michael2 said 792 days ago (September 21st, 2007) | |
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this is really nice, if i get a chance I may have a go at this one. really nicely arranged and great sounds. what did you record on, it sounds awesome? Check out my latest song called Behind Enemy Lines (w/Bud and Particle Dots)
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| Schello said 792 days ago (September 21st, 2007) | |
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:-) Si, right you need the vocalist in this track..exxxxeccccellent! anyway.... Im not musician --------------- Schello Check out my latest song called Snozz'en (Cronik Mix)
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| spitlogic said 791 days ago (September 22nd, 2007) | |
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I can see no wrong Tight mix and well done on the melody. It reminds me of a love song (a longing for love kinda song). Check out my latest song called Guillotine
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| Morning Light said 791 days ago (September 22nd, 2007) | |
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FABULOUS!!! THIS IS BEAUTIFUL.....I am singing....would love to try this out....it seems to beg for unusual vocals...something different...some experimenting.. I love the pitch changes. :) Morning Light Check out my latest song called Morning Rose
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| iam0pen said 791 days ago (September 22nd, 2007) | |
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Want vocals? I would be more then happy to try out something...it inspires me a lot.... Let me know. |
| bud said 791 days ago (September 22nd, 2007) | |
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Nice bed - very Yaz I hear a lot of possibilities in this - just wish I had more time to give it a whirl. Check out my latest song called eye for you (w/particledots and michael2)
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| Feter said 791 days ago (September 22nd, 2007) | |
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Still Waiting For You this can go two ways ...very electro .. and the other way bit pop rock ... nice theme for a soundbed ..wish to hear what other Mjer's would add to this ...! Check out my latest song called A Night With Feter feat'(Roxylee sloparts crissew johnwhitehead and Yamin AL Yamani )
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| Eccentrikamerika said 790 days ago (September 23rd, 2007) | |
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! great synthscape handsome! love those big dark electrobubbles. Check out my latest song called Car Go Fast
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| alexweiler said 790 days ago (September 23rd, 2007) | |
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vocals very nicely done, EZ! Maybe Morning Light could contribute her lovely voice to make this complete? anyway ... i already like it as is. Check out my latest song called Roaming (Heavy Remix)
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| craft said 790 days ago (September 23rd, 2007) | |
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nice love song You just need a sweet voice talking or singing on top and maybe the guitar solo may be a cool idea... There are many skilled guitar players at macjams... You'll have no problem finding one... Best of luck Check out my latest song called Blue Lights (feat. Spleenveil)
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| dynoMYSTIC said 789 days ago (September 24th, 2007) | |
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I dig the dissonant piano raising this piece to a new level, strangely enough. Uncluttered, I lyke itt da weigh itt iz. Check out my latest song called Gravity
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| perceptualvortex said 789 days ago (September 24th, 2007) | |
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Subtle This is really grooving, in a low key kind of way. I liked the synths and gentle melodies, as well as the science fiction atmosphere. Check out my latest song called Machine Man (w Beastie Boys)
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| Richard_Schletty said 339 days ago (December 17th, 2008) | |
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Moving earth and sky Gradual progression toward full throttle. Self-confident rotary action. Big sky meets resonating igneous mantle. Worthy of lyrical treatment. A song about steady passion. Flower seed thrusting through asphalt, seeking the sun. Check out my latest song called The Quarry (part 4) - words by Pope John Paul II (Karol Wojtyla)
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drakonis
Somewhat sparse, and when the harmonies come in, they were unusual... and although not a bad thing, it definitely took me a bit to mentally determine the chords and direction... it seemed to wander a bit. So yes, this needs a lead over the top... but I really like the rich bass, and the synthy washes. Good choices for voices... but my poor little brain cannot figure out what kind of melody would fit over this. Hmm... hope that's somewhat useful feedback! I think I liked the prior soundbed of yours a little more, but that's just my taste (you asked which I liked better.)
ttfn,
Drakonis