Sally

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This song sat in a folder for a year or so. I had a few hours free yesterday and decided to give it a go. Short and sweet. My first pop tune with strings. Only the drums are loops.

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Sally sang a song about a mountain
rising from the sea
blue, blue skies and sandy, sandy beaches
a soft and gentle breeze
blowin through the graceful arcing palm trees
a picture perfect scene
Sally’s never been out of the city
she doesn’t watch TV

she’s got a really great imagination
the kind of girl who read a lot when she was young
her records all are scratched and out of their jackets
they skip and make her laugh when the phone rings
watch her run

Sally sang a song about a river
flowing aimlessly
past the towns and through the wild woodlands
winding to the sea
riverboats pull barges from the coal mines
silent and serene
Sally’s lost in Twain’s Americana
her favorite place to be

Song Stats

Hits: 2272
Comments: 46
Fans: 21
Plays: 192
Downloads: 134

Uploaded: Sep 22, 2007 - 08:49:55 AM
Last Updated: Sep 22, 2007 - 11:42:26 AM Last Played: Jan 15, 2013 - 03:43:12 AM

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Keywords:

Mar Twain (1), river (26), records (7), books (5), imagination (40), Sally (6)

Hardware:

iMac G5
Martin D18
Ibanez Road Star II Bass
Oxygen8 Keyboard
Samson USB mic

Software:

GB3

Comments

Feter	Feter said 2098 days ago (September 22nd, 2007)
	Sally Excellent tune and vision ..you song writin is impessive ..I would like to hear your voice more into front .the strings arrangment is pretty I like how the song go over all ..welldone my friend ! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

bud

bud said 2098 days ago (September 22nd, 2007)

Thanks Feter
You're so good a t leaving comments - I really appreciate it. You're right about the vocals being a little low - I guess I wasn't very confident about the strength of the lyrics - so I kept them a little buried. By the same token - I listened to the radio a little this week and got really turned off by the super up front vocals that you hear there.

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The Infinites	The Infinites said 2098 days ago (September 22nd, 2007)
	Marvellous! Strings are great, as is guitar. Nice vision-filled tune - I can see the lines as pictures. You have a real 'country' voice, I like a lot, easy on the ear, but not bland, great character. Would have liked it to be longer - the fade came as a surpize, but that's a compliment as I wanted more! DL'd! Jim Check out my latest song called Again

bud

bud said 2098 days ago (September 22nd, 2007)

Thanks Jim -
Seems we both got the string bug - from what I heard in your latest tune. Appreciate the comments - I purposely worked to keep this song at 3 minutes. My new goal is to keep songs shorter and to the point. It's not a pop song credo - it's just a way of injecting some discipline into my process. And besides - we all have limited amounts of time we can spend here listening.

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lengold	lengold said 2098 days ago (September 22nd, 2007)
	Lovely sweet song - beautifully restrained playing and the strings work very well. Vocals are sounding very CSNY. Lovely. Cheers Len Check out my latest song called B E A U T I F U L

bud

bud said 2098 days ago (September 22nd, 2007)

Good comments Len -
This was an exercise in restraint. I tried to play as little as possible on each track and work with as few tracks as possible and to get a full sound. Started with basic drums and rhythm guitar. Added one track of vocals and when I played the bass - I consciously left openings for the next voice (not knowing what that was gonna be). I ended up with Cello for the melody and then augmented with pizzicato strings for accent and orchestral strings for backing.
CSNY are a very nice compliment BTW. Thanks.

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SmokeyVW	SmokeyVW said 2098 days ago (September 22nd, 2007)
	skip and make her laugh nice imagery the mood of the music fits the lyrics very well. thanks Check out my latest song called Burnt Sienna

bud	bud said 2098 days ago (September 22nd, 2007)
	Thanks Smokey the idea was to make something a little light and frothy. Check out my latest song called fig field

racerat

racerat said 2098 days ago (September 22nd, 2007)

pizzicato
Hey Bud,
Nice little pop tune. I love pop songs. Very smooth and warm. I agree with the CSNY comment. I also agree with you about the vocals. I actually like them farther back. I do the same thing with mine much of the time. I find most popular music, and actually much of what is here on MJ has the vocals featured too prominently. I quess I hesitate to want to hear my voice too loud as well. It being what it is...ouch.I think it focuses ones attention more on the music, which in the case of this song is wonderful. The strings are ace. I love the pizzicato pluckings, they add a nice "snappiness" if that's a word. Cool.

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bud	bud said 2097 days ago (September 23rd, 2007)
	I was hoping you'd drop by Philip thought you might appreciate a little pop ditty. Glad you agree on the vocal level issue - it's just way out of control on most radio fare. Check out my latest song called fig field

Peter Bauckham	Peter Bauckham said 2098 days ago (September 22nd, 2007)
	Great tune - love the arrangement. The strings work really well. Really catchy. This one will be working its way on to a CD for the car. Thanks for finishing, and sharing, it. All the best Peter Check out my latest song called Reality TV MJRF2010

bud	bud said 2097 days ago (September 23rd, 2007)
	Thanks Peter - I dig your recent tune as well. Check out my latest song called fig field

Vic Holman	Vic Holman said 2097 days ago (September 22nd, 2007)
	60's AM hit Really has a kind of thing that i would remember hearing in the late 60's. Mixed in with Lulu, the buckinghams, tommy roe, etc. And topped off with a appearance on the ed sullivan show. Of course with a mock groovy sixties background set. Check out my latest song called They Must

bud	bud said 2097 days ago (September 23rd, 2007)
	I recently watched "To Sir With Love" maybe it crept into my subconscious. Do I get to wear a Nehru jacket and granny glasses? Check out my latest song called fig field

echoroom	echoroom said 2097 days ago (September 23rd, 2007)
	Light little tune.. ..that really reminds me of the Auteurs lighter moments. The vocal is very restrained, and gives the track a slightly disconnected feel that I really like. Nice chord sequence on this - i must nick it. steve Check out my latest song called Fire of love (remixed version)

davisamerica	davisamerica said 2097 days ago (September 23rd, 2007)
	wow loved this song. know we all want the tech. thing as refined as possible but i love the whole feel of this song....fact is i need to vote. great lyrics...as said before i can "see this" song! Check out my latest song called 12

davisamerica	davisamerica said 2097 days ago (September 23rd, 2007)
	so ok can't vote on this gem...sending a 10 with respect anyway! Check out my latest song called 12

bud	bud said 2097 days ago (September 23rd, 2007)
	I'm basically a lo-tech guy but I'm always open to advice and comments. Thanks for stopping by. Check out my latest song called fig field

Peter Bauckham	Peter Bauckham said 2097 days ago (September 23rd, 2007)
	They're brilliant... everyone should listen to The Auteurs! Check out my latest song called Reality TV MJRF2010

bud	bud said 2097 days ago (September 23rd, 2007)
	Must listen to the Auteurs Thanks for the ref. The chords are free: D - C#m - F#m - A - have your way with them. Check out my latest song called fig field

bud	bud said 2097 days ago (September 23rd, 2007)
	Must listen to the Auteurs Thanks for the ref. The chords are free: D - C#m - F#m - A - have your way with them. Check out my latest song called fig field

bud	bud said 2097 days ago (September 23rd, 2007)
	See below - I couldn't seem to get it together this morning. Check out my latest song called fig field

bud	bud said 2097 days ago (September 23rd, 2007)
	Every time I answer echoroom it makes it a new post. ??? Check out my latest song called fig field

	said 2097 days ago (September 23rd, 2007)
	Good stuff Bud... It's nice to leave one's comfort zone and try new things huh? Your use of strings herein is judicious and effective. Nice lyrics and chord progression. It has a really classic folk-rock sound, or should I say folk-pop? Nice use of drum loops as well. Be well!

bud	bud said 2097 days ago (September 23rd, 2007)
	Thanks Mike Pirate John got me using the acoustic - and then this tune just took on it's own life. This is the first song where I used the Drums on Demand Vol. 1 Basics I just bought. Check out my latest song called fig field

said 2097 days ago (September 23rd, 2007)

The Great Days Of Pop Music
...my childhood, spent listening to the top 40 on my little AM radio when it really meant something. Well, maybe not... but there were these short, crisp and sweet tunes that became touches of colour in the very fabric of the summer, and this reminds me of those days. I'd leave that thing on for hours, patiently waiting for the DJ to play a particular tune... I can still smell the grass, the breeze, hear the song.

I love the simple and surreal, dreamy sound of this - I would have waited quite a while for the DJ to get around to this one. Your voice is relaxed and strong, and easily deserves to be given more of the spotlight, though.

bud	bud said 2097 days ago (September 23rd, 2007)
	I'm honored to be added to your AM playlist I too remember songs like Hang On Sloopy, Mrs. Jones You've Got A Lovely Daughter, I think We're Alone Now, Ferry 'Cross the Mersey, and many more fresh pop tunes that came from my transistor back in the day. Thanks for mentioning it. Check out my latest song called fig field

	said 2096 days ago (September 23rd, 2007)
	Bud! Ok Whos Sally And when did she run to the phone when her records were skipping. So nice the way you put this together. Its a task I cant achieve I try to make something coherent and beautifull but it always turns out twisted and off beat. The simplicity in this song makes it complex does that make sense. Great job on this one you got me rambling Thanks agian Bud for sharing!!!

bud	bud said 2096 days ago (September 23rd, 2007)
	I'm trying a new deal - three minute songs. Once I get that worked out I'll move down to two minute songs. The Ramones did just fine with 1:25. As a result things get pretty minimal and focused. It's a gift to my fellow jammers - less time listening to my stuff. I love it when you ramble. Check out my latest song called fig field

Axgrinder	Axgrinder said 2096 days ago (September 23rd, 2007)
	Terrific, Bud! Please forgive my tardiness bro. You have a real Neil young flavor going on here. Kind of a make you smile, feel good and don't worry sort of tune! No, I don't make a whole lot of sense, probably because I haven't got any ;-P Nice work all around. A very nice and relaxing listen that I enjoyed very much! Thanks, Ax Check out my latest song called Dark Circus

bud	bud said 2096 days ago (September 24th, 2007)
	Glad you stopped by for a listen. Your comments make sense to me. Check out my latest song called fig field

Dj French Toast

Dj French Toast said 2096 days ago (September 23rd, 2007)

I really
liked the strings in this tune man . Ive been thinking alot lately about what I really enjoy listening to . And ive been taking second listens to music I dont like and genres with stigmas attached to them like polka and big band and classical french and mexican etc... . And from all the music ive been just listening to with an open mind and fluid ear.... music with strings always grab my soul and drag me in .....no matter what the song is about or how it sounds the violin or chello or double bass or viola suck me right in ....not that this song needs my arm pulled to listen to it by any means but I found my being quickly pulled from my body to float with your words and moved by your composition . Indeed a wonderful jam and awesome story as well . I can defenetly relate to jacket less records scattered all over ......its late im goin to bed

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bud	bud said 2096 days ago (September 24th, 2007)
	Hey there Benny Nice to hear about your sound safaris - always good to get out. The cello really does it for me too - it's similar to the saxophone in that it falls within the general vocal range - it has a recognizable voice. I appreciate your comments. Check out my latest song called fig field

Monkaton	Monkaton said 2096 days ago (September 24th, 2007)
	How about a remix? The song is good. Maybe a slower version would help to emphasize the lyrics. Also I would suggest a remix. Bring the vocals up, let your Lou Reed shine. Good musical ideas that could be fleshed out a bit more, especially the ending. Check out my latest song called Dirty Looks

bud	bud said 2096 days ago (September 24th, 2007)
	Good ears - this started as a little Coney Island Baby era Lou tune and took a left turn somewhere. I'll consider a remix. This was thrown together extremely quickly. One of those "window of opportunity" compositions. Thanks for dropping by. Check out my latest song called fig field

	said 2096 days ago (September 24th, 2007)
	yeah such a relieve after my own intense track. beautiful and light. d/l'ed and in the chill-out folder. awesome track sir! love, Jb

bud	bud said 2095 days ago (September 25th, 2007)
	Thanks JB I'm honored to be in your chill out folder. Check out my latest song called fig field

EZamor	EZamor said 2095 days ago (September 24th, 2007)
	cool strings what a nice song! for whatever reason, the strings really caught my attention. a simple but very effective arrangement. gotta download this one. :) cheerz, -=ez Check out my latest song called Chrysta Bell - The Truth Is [EZamor Mix]

bud	bud said 2095 days ago (September 25th, 2007)
	Glad you dropped by - This was my first string arrangement and it was really fun. It opens up a whole different way of thinking about musical lines. Until I started in with the cello I didn't hear the ascending line in the chorus. Check out my latest song called fig field

Macaudion	Macaudion said 2092 days ago (September 28th, 2007)
	Lots of sweet goodness goin on here I love the feel of this! Dion Check out my latest song called Pavel

bud	bud said 2092 days ago (September 28th, 2007)
	Glad you liked it it's my sugar shot. Check out my latest song called fig field

guitapick	guitapick said 2092 days ago (September 28th, 2007)
	Nice tune... ...the lyrics paint a beautiful theme...Twain's America... ...I love the understated strings and that D18 sounds great... Check out my latest song called 'Cuz I Can

Schello	Schello said 2090 days ago (September 30th, 2007)
	;-) I like the melody...classicPOP so hard for to build... I believe , that at Steve (Echoroom) like it! Spectacular Mr. Bud..as alwayes! Im not musician ------------------ Schello Check out my latest song called Snozz'en (Cronik Mix)

lavalamp	lavalamp said 2086 days ago (October 4th, 2007)
	Sorry I missed it Very complete song as far as production and structure. Kind of layered. Strong lyrics. Did anyone comment that the singing sounds a little quiet? Oh, now I see Feter did, sorry. Good song. Dave Check out my latest song called A Funky Little Thing

bud	bud said 2086 days ago (October 4th, 2007)
	Thanks for checking end I appreciate your comments - yeah the vocals are a little low I agree. I'm having fun with the 3 minute pop format - stay tuned for more. Check out my latest song called fig field

Bob6stringer

Bob6stringer said 877 days ago (January 24th, 2011)

Sounds great after 4+ years, too!
Looks like I missed this one a loonnng time ago, but I really like, as well as the mix. The vocals (to the 1st comment by Feter) are audible, but still part of the band (where I like 'em). The lyrics paint a very warm illustration of someone I'd like to know more about.

I'm so glad we've got fun stuff going on at MJ like the 2011 "cover challenge" and Bob "five extra arms" Dorsey's cover of this tune that led me here!

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