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i'm alive (final cut) rock version


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nevermine

 Genre: Rock
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ok heres another upgrade to i'm alive with everything plus distorted guitars to give it more of my style ;) and to fill it up a bit more

written about my father who caused me pain
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Lyrics
verse1
break me, hate me,take me, make me nothing like you always do
you make me feel like i'm worthless
in your eyes and view,
i know i don't need you,i don't need you to survive, don't need you in my life,


break me, hate me, take me, make me nothing like u always do,
rape me, break me down, u don't need nothing with u,
i don't need this, yes i don't need u in my life, to survive, i know i'll make soemthing of my life.

ch

i'm alive, i'm alive,
i don't need you in my life,

verse 2

so this is goodbye and i'm sick of
all your god dam lies,
i'm sick of being put down by the words u speak inside my mind,
i'm tired of the lies, i'm tired of the lies, that were spoke to me when i was just a child.
walk away, i'll walk away from all the shit,that you, you
you're so fuken selfish that you don't even care the things that you made me do,
you break me down again, you broke my heart again and i'm so sick and tired i am gonna say goodbye yeah..

ch

i'm alive, i'm alive,
without you by my side i'm alive,
i'm alive,
without you by my side i'm alive,
i'm alive,
without you by my side i'm alive.

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Uploaded: Sep 24, 2007 - 03:42:31 AM
Last Updated: Sep 24, 2007 - 03:42:31 AM Last Played: Aug 01, 2009 - 11:56:28 PM
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EZamor said 790 days ago (September 24th, 2007)
best version
this is great. the lyrics really move me. guess it reminds me of my father when i was growing up. anyway, this came out very well. i'm still not sure about the way it just seems to cut off at the end, but i can see that you most likely did it that way for deliberate effect.

looking forward to hearing more of your songs.

cheerz,
-=ez
Check out my latest song called Peace (One Drop in the Blue) (w/ LunaTrick)
nevermine said 790 days ago (September 25th, 2007)
cool thanku
hey thanks mate, i dunno if i like the ending either so ur not alone, nice 2 get ur comment, was a bit unsure about this one but u relieved my worried mind... thanks a million and glad u could relate....

geoff

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music is life so live it
Check out my latest song called fall into the stars
lengold said 790 days ago (September 25th, 2007)
This
is a great song. The vocals sound much better without so much echo and the synths are not so overpowering. Really good work. D/loaded. Thanks.
Len


Check out my latest song called Dodgy Doughnut
nevermine said 790 days ago (September 25th, 2007)
hey len
thanks , i'm honoured that you have d/l it. glad you guys are getting something out of my songs, not just a headache lol.... hopefully when i get my speakers i will get levels right alot sooner too... thanks again for ur comments

geoff

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music is life so live it
Check out my latest song called fall into the stars
davisamerica said 790 days ago (September 25th, 2007)
u r
DEFIANTLY and definitely alive! great little rocker!
Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)
nevermine said 790 days ago (September 25th, 2007)
sweet!!
hey thanks man.... love being alive, feels sooo good, thanks for ur comment and will have to check u out, haven't heard of u b4, maybe i'm just niave hehe

ciao

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music is life so live it
Check out my latest song called fall into the stars
said 790 days ago (September 25th, 2007)
Cool! I like..
the songwriting, but I think you can cut some of the delay on the vox. It will let it stand out more in the mix.

Great emotion on the vox.

Peace
nevermine said 790 days ago (September 25th, 2007)
hey
yeah thanks man, think ur right hey!! i am using headphones, ear bud ones lol and when i play it on a cd afterwards i'm like oh shit this is out and thats out... thanks cos i will make sure when i redo them i will keep these things to a minimum!! i really appreciate ur feedback

ciao 4now

geoff :)

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music is life so live it
Check out my latest song called fall into the stars
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just a guy tryin to make a difference in this cold world. all songs are written over the last few years thru different times of my life, some happy, some sad, some bitter, some broken.... some with bands and some digital but all stories from life. no... [see more]

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