What an excellent title for a song! Check out the Voluntary Human Extinction Society on the web. Production wise - the vocal is too far to the front - take it down a bit, and try applying the "monster" setting in the garageband vocals settings (just my opinion, don't hit me!). Guitar was great - very Napalm Death, but I think the drums need tightening up - what about a low fast double kick drum underneath it all? Look forward to the next one!

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scares me but I like it.

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Welcome to MacJams....where all your musical expressions can be released!!! I am not a big fan of death wish songs, nor do I toy with the idea that so called "overpopulation" is a thing that requires self appointed people to see it there calling, to control it, with evil means, and lack of respect for life. This is a painful song, I do not know who the person is you are referring to, but I hope things get better, and hmmm, well, this is about as low as it goes, so it can only go up :D!!!!! ExtremeHeavyDeathMetal........we have a new genre! Yikes! I guess I can certainly agree with those Keywords, but cool and awesome.....he he .....bit of a stretch!!! STILL, I am a LIFE person, so keep making songs, and don't die!!! Everyone has a unique gift to share.

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Thanx for the constructive criticism. =] I pretty much recorded since I was a bit angry at things. Ya know, but I shouldn't be talking since I intend on having a child of mine own someday. I only want one child. So yeah and plus I recorded it for strictly shock value. It is appropriate for a death metal song.

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Well, it sounds cathartic! Music is a good outlet for raw, screaming, heavy noise... but in my experience, it's much more fun to play this kind of thing than listen to it. It's visceral, which is good, but it would be cooler if it were organized.

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