for the broken

nevermine

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taking me forver to finish this so thought i'd give u a preview... wrote this about all the broken and hopeless people in the city of brisbane that everyone walk by

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intro

this is for the broken,
left alone unspoken,
no one even notices,
for the broken

verse1

take the time to look at me
you're so blind u can't even see
never even really noticed me

now i sit here all alone and i bleed
what's it gonna take to look at me
we're the broken but we make this world go round, round and round
and i

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Uploaded: Sep 27, 2007 - 11:56:17 PM
Last Updated: Sep 27, 2007 - 11:56:17 PM Last Played: Jan 25, 2009 - 05:59:31 AM

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*itiswotitis*	*itiswotitis* said 787 days ago (September 28th, 2007)
	dark tune... I guess u see a bit of that in the valley...great lyrics...would have liked to hear th vocals up a tad.. powering tune! Check out my latest song called WALKING BASS IN THE CLOUDS

nevermine

nevermine said 787 days ago (September 28th, 2007)

dunno what to say in the title areas so umm thanks will do :)
hey thanks for ur feedback, i was so used to using my crappy headphones that i forgot to use my speakers more to test levels lol but i am working on setting the vocals higher now, thanku and glad u liked it.... i am afraid i might have lost half the song lol computers can be good and can be a curse all at once lol oh well back to the studio... ciao 4 now :)

i actually wrote it about two guys that asked me for money in brissy near the mall and i gave him a few dollars and he was so stoked and said he was gonna do a shop over if i hadn't of come along so i felt pretty good in myself but pretty angry about the situation of the poor in brisbane and then to top it off i walked home and passed a guy pacing up and down a cement slab near coronation drive.. it's like he was invisible to everyone and i felt a bit sad but i can't save anyone lol i can't even save myself lol quote from save yourself by stabbing westward,,, haha always wanted to use that line somewhere, anyways going to bed now, waffling on, this must be the longest reply i ever sent lol lucky you

ok ciao this time

geoff

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said 787 days ago (September 28th, 2007)

good concept
i liked the drums, very simple, yet almost tribal.
i do agree with itis, vocals need more volume, and maybe a little more presence. one thing about the guitars; i am not sure what your rig is, but i find a tad less off the bass end, and a little more presence will seperate them from the bass tone. also, ease off the distortion a little. it might sound wierd, but lately i have been turning my distortion down to halfways or less, and my guitars sound heavier... i am not an enigineer, so i do not know why this is, but is just makes them sound fuller without that angry group of mosquioes sound..... try several tracks as well, and have one or two of them be in a different tone. feather those together to fatten your overall sound.. on my latest posts, i am using 5 tracks of guitar for the main rhythms, with an additional track thrown in bits for the beginning and end . great tune, tho, dont get me wrong here. i liked the concept and the lyrics. i think every place has invisible citizens, and we look away when we should be lending a helping hand..

nevermine

nevermine said 787 days ago (September 28th, 2007)

hey thanks r.a.d for sharin ur knowledge man
i got the weekend to myself hehe while my girls in usa:( so i'll give that a go what u said. the only problem i face is that i turn my elctric guitar on full to get a distorted sound haha explaingig the mosie efect hehe tho i kinda like it in this song lol tho i hate them in real life but i did notice the bass hiding so i think you might like the next version better tho the chorus is missing bass at the moment ..i am getting a new amp with atleast 15 knobs on it so i'll be able to have some fun with that trying the other things u said to so thanku and i will def get onto it

geoff

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music is life so live it

Check out my latest song called fall into the stars

	said 785 days ago (September 30th, 2007)
	Excellent! Wow Geoff...you nailed the spirit of this subject. Really good stuff...my only nit is it seems too short...left me wanting more! Be well!

nevermine	nevermine said 784 days ago (September 30th, 2007)
	hey amagi?? i think it's you, woohoo, thanks for ur comment my man, u know i always appreciated ur input and advice!! really wanted to make a noise for the broken and abandoned in this song so i'm glad i achieved it, just gotta finish it now that i've sorted my studio out ;) ciao bro --- music is life so live it Check out my latest song called fall into the stars

lavalamp

lavalamp said 781 days ago (October 4th, 2007)

Good job mate
Hey man, another good song. Think you're a excellent writer. Have you ever tried going to "master track" on GB, and then selecting "AU graphic EQ", then messing around with the levels? I think this may be the key for the leveling problems.
Again, you a great writer and singer, just need more tweeking with the levels and EQ. but who am I to talk?
Dave

Check out my latest song called Googolplex Times Zero

nevermine	nevermine said 781 days ago (October 4th, 2007)
	LL my greatest fan hehe HEY DAVE!! what is GB? hehe bit naive hey lol.. but if u let me know i will get it and try it, at the moment i use magix and have just started to learn the mastering tools, slowly, and yes u can talk, u have the exoerience and i welcome it, ty :) geoff --- music is life so live it Check out my latest song called fall into the stars

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just a guy tryin to make a difference in this cold world. all songs are written over the last few years thru different times of my life, some happy, some sad, some bitter, some broken.... some with bands and some digital but all stories from life. no... [see more]

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