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for the broken (edit no 1 hehe)


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nevermine

 Genre: Hard Rock

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work in progress but a preview of a song i'm workin on, think the vocals r better now itiswatitis:) but if not let me know :) might take like a year to finish tho lol nah maybe the weekend 'i hope' hehe anyways about the broken people i saw in brisbane the other day... and everyone walks by
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intro

this is for the broken,
left alone unspoken,
no one even notices,
for the broken

verse1

take the time to look at me
you're so blind u can't even see
never even really noticed me

now i sit here all alone and i bleed
what's it gonna take to look at me
we're the broken but we make this world go round, round and round


ch

broken, beaten, empty, hopeless abandoned, useless, nothing,

they left here without you,
they're nothin to you,
you wash your hands of the blood still it's on you

to be continued :)
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Plays: 111
Downloads: 41
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Uploaded: Sep 28, 2007 - 09:28:44 AM
Last Updated: Sep 28, 2007 - 09:53:47 AM Last Played: Nov 06, 2009 - 06:33:19 AM
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gwhoose said 791 days ago (September 28th, 2007)
ramstein
nice drive. could see some more effect on the voice in the straight places; but only sleight.
Check out my latest song called Deck The Halls
nevermine said 791 days ago (September 28th, 2007)
thanks
yeah i will get onto the vox effects when i'm done, i tried to during it but kinda got lost lol so i have decided to master it all at the end including effects but thanks cos atleast i won't get carried away... just sleight :)

cheers

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Axgrinder said 791 days ago (September 28th, 2007)
Up to know good I see!
;-P This is a hell of a bed my friend, Vocals need more blending and a smidgin of reverb/delay. I dig what you've got brewin here and can't wait to hear the finished product! This R-O-C-K-S for sure. I would say more but..... nevemine ;-o

Ax
Check out my latest song called Dark Circus
nevermine said 791 days ago (September 28th, 2007)
hey i'm an angel, maybe a bit darkened ;)
u must be thinkin of someone else hehe...nah thanks for ur feedback brother, i should get it finished by sunday fingers crossed and i'll hit the vocals with some tasty effects and master it all out 4 u guys....thanks 4 ur comments and i look forward to serenating u with the final version haha :)

geoff aka nevermine :-P

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just a guy tryin to make a difference in this cold world. all songs are written over the last few years thru different times of my life, some happy, some sad, some bitter, some broken.... some with bands and some digital but all stories from life. no... [see more]

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