Great job!

It kinda reminded me of a Creed tune.

Keep rocking!!!!!

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I like the transition from clean to amped.The drums are
mixed just right for my taste.Cool!

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This genre usually jars me, but this song is so well done
that I can appreciate your excellent guitar playing and
especially your production values. It would be all-too easy
to overdo those loud chords but they're just right!

Drums are also tastefully done with good variety.

Ending sounded a bit chop

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Not really my genre of rock, either... HOWEVER, Nice
and sharp guitar tones and well mixed... sounds like
a bed for some vocals, eh? A suggestion would be to
have a stronger bass presence in the song, but that's
a minor one.

Definitely get some vocals on that puppy, though...
it's beggin' for 'em like Beggin' Strips. :P

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The sound you get in your intro is crystal clear,
marvelous. What a great feel, production and
performance. Cool groove too. The slide into the
distortion guitar sections are pretty seamless. But coming
out of the distortion section the first time is kind of
abrupt; perhaps a little more reverb on the last power
chord would give it more of a tail, or something to bridge
the section. The second transition is great, utilizing new
sounds. Consider putting on an ending that is and real
ending, a coda that lifts the piece into something more,
adds dimension; or return to your original theme and fade
out. Right now it is jarringly abrupt.

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Good basic structure, the arrangement is right on. I would
give the metallic guitar sound a little bit more reverb and
fullness, and the distorted guitar could use a little bit
more depth, you know... more oomph. The distorted
rythm guitar is close and full, which is nice... Try playing
with the AU Equalizers for each track and the compressor
for the master track.

The ending – you can work out something better, I'm sure.
:)

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8-8-9-8

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