Very delicate and sweet. I really enjoyed the simplicity of it and felt the tenderness. Nice job. Thanks for sharing!

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Thanks for listening. It has been in my head for days so I finally decided to put it down. :)

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,fragile and reflective...I liked.
Congratulations!You did a good job!

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I'm glad you liked it! Thank you so much for listening.

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This is a nice little piece, with potential to be expanded.

I wish it were longer and more developed, since you set up a mellow mood, very pleasant listening. But the piece ended almost before it really began.

The string sound was unnecessary to my ears; the piano itself was fine without it.

By the way, welcome to MacJams!

You will find that most people appreciate song art, as well as background on how you came to compose this piece, how you recorded it, hardware and software used, etc.

For example, was this a synth sound piano or real? Whichever it was, you achieved a decent sound.

HAVE FUN here!

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Thanks for the comment. I'll remember to that those things in the future. I'm still new to everything :). Anywho this was all done on garageband. Thanks again.

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It has a real contemplative feel, like autumn.

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Thank you :)

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Really sad piano sound, thanks for sharing such special moments ! KUDOS for the sound and playing !



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Sad is good...as odd as that sounds :P. I'm pleases that you like it! Thanks for listening.

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i love it. Can i add vocals to this one day?

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I would be honored. I can make it longer if it needs to as well. I just usually get in trouble with over doing things so I stopped while it had just enough. But yeah, I would be honored for you to add vocals :).

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Strong melodic progression and excellent use of musical space for dramatic effect. Musical! I liked the subtle strings in the background. Although I agree with others who think it could be expanded and elaborated upon, it's nice to sometimes just let little statements be little statements. To quote Stravinsky,'some music ends long after it's over'. Perhaps you could add a little more in the way of texture, but working it up to some large symphonic monstrosity would be a mistake. Most enjoyed!

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