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Hits: 322
Comments: 6
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Plays: 86
Last Played: May 04, 2008 - 12:50:40 AM
Downloads: 31
Fans: 2
Uploaded: Oct 07, 2007 - 08:22:12 PM
Last Updated: Oct 07, 2007 - 08:22:12 PM



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Keywords:
Breathe (8)
Description:
song 2

Lyrics:
Where you been? I’ve been worried , I been staying up all night
I am sweating, while I’m thinking, now it’s aching from all this craziness inside my head
What ya gonna do? How you gonna go? Where you gonna hide when it starts to sink in?
Now your wondering, and its hurting, but you best pack your stuff cause now its time to leave
Now your gone and it feels good I’ve got all the time in the world
What ya gonna do, how you gonna go, where you gonna hide when it starts to sink in?
Now your wondering, and its hurting but its all woulda coulda shoulda been now so just breathe


Hardware:
Acoustic guitar, keyboard

Software:
Garageband
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Well done... &mdash 10/08/07 - 12:23:24 AM
and a very enjoyable listen.Nice flow,use of sounds and the guitar lead and whistlin' parts are just so right on for the song.Good stuff!

Blessings,

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Breathe &mdash 10/14/07 - 03:42:31 PM
thanks for listening !!
bt

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panning &mdash 10/08/07 - 08:24:09 PM
Hey,
Welcome to MacJams. This is a cool jangly tune. The emotion is all there. Well sung and played. Nice lo-fi drum machine. The lyrics sound like you really mean it which is 9-10ths of the battle. The guitar, tamborine, synth's are constantly moving/ panning all over the place which I find very distracting from a otherwise cool song. But maybe that was the intention--to add more and more tension, which it accomplishes...Particularly like the lead acoustic, very tasty.
Look forward to hearing more.
P

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panning &mdash 10/14/07 - 03:45:16 PM
Hey P,
Thanks for listening and your helpful criticism, your right, I need to fix the panning. Glad you liked the guitar solo!
bt

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Breathe &mdash 10/14/07 - 03:45:59 PM
Cool Rockin man !!

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cool &mdash 10/25/07 - 04:15:39 PM
lyrics play well and instrument layout works. enjoyed

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