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After All? by cjhoose [Email]

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Last Played: Nov 24, 2008 - 10:00:04 AM
Downloads: 46
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Uploaded: Oct 17, 2007 - 11:17:16 AM
Last Updated: Oct 17, 2007 - 11:17:16 AM



Description:
Follow-up-in-progress to "Just Not Right".

Not quite happy with it, and i think it needs bass, and something more like the chimes on the other song... making this is a "first draft" eh?

Lyrics:
I listened far too long
to warrant caution signs
Don't worry about this song -
I haven't lost my mind.

Suppose I really am
an angel after all.
All the good I've done,
I could have let you fall!

I've created worlds alone
brought them to their feet
I would give them all to you
but there is not enough to see.

There are signs I will not read,
roads I can not choose.
Bones that I can't break
Powers not affordable to use.

Hardware:
macbook pro, alesis multimix 8, sound booth, griffin imic, 2000's Audio mic

Software:
LE7, some demo plugins
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Nice tune &mdash 10/17/07 - 01:42:33 PM
good singing - I like the contrast with the dry and slightly more processed vox - and the melody is catchy.

And I know what you mean, people always call me angel as well ;-) Not yet, I tell them - but maybe I am an angel after all...

Looking forward to the next mix.

/Henke

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great stuff &mdash 10/17/07 - 02:22:41 PM
ilove this.very cool mix of synth pop and your charming vocals ( have I said that I love your voice before?). great job.

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Good Tune &mdash 10/17/07 - 03:36:14 PM
You may want to look up old Tom Tom Club recordings. They feature Tina Weymouth from the Talking heads. She is a great bass player and the music is close to the style you have here.

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CJH &mdash 10/17/07 - 05:05:42 PM
I really like the vocals (lyrics too)! Generally full/rich feel.

Well done!
Doug

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Pure Pop &mdash 10/17/07 - 06:51:15 PM
Great singing CJ...but then its always really cool when you sing! Like this a lot
Cheers
Steve

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I &mdash 10/17/07 - 07:26:31 PM
Haven't heard the other versions but I love the chorus where all the harmonies come in - is really unusual and original.What a sweet voice you have! Unusual chords - quite a fascinating creation.Sounds like it might benefit from a guitar somewhere,but hmm I'm gonna listen again,such was your delivery and deep but simple lyrics

Cheers - RG

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Cool tune... &mdash 10/22/07 - 07:58:23 AM
"There are signs I will not read,
roads I can not choose.
Bones that I can't break
Powers not affordable to use"

Great stuff...

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Brilliance! &mdash 10/22/07 - 06:23:01 PM
I didn't know that MJ had 'Pop (alternative)' category until now but with its pop/dance beat, infectious chorus and quirky sweetly perturbing lyrics this song fits it perfectly! Highly original and imaginative work - and it's great to hear you singing again.

KK

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Cool &mdash 10/25/07 - 11:55:04 AM
tune. The vox sound really good. It will be intersting to hear what the bass will sound like.

Frank.

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thoughts from the bull... &mdash 08/24/08 - 10:23:54 AM
i was just listening to JUST NOT RIGHT at home, and realized I haven't stopped by in a while.

for me, this is a real treat - what a great follow up to NJR.

this is a venture in a different direction, but with that comes the satisfaction of your vocal arrangement.

well done! and thank you!

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