kinda grows on me - I like the mix and the instrumentation - your voice carries this well. Reminds me a little of Syd Barrett. I especially like the single note piano in the background.

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sweet song i like that!
NIce lyric... nice vocals...unusual music works really nicely!

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Smiley Smile-like vibe

Well done

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.. it has a pretty 'up' positive feel to it I like .. nicely laid-back in style of guitar playing and singing.

Satisfying...hope it helped with the sleep.

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here s another front portch song ..this is
very moody ...meloncholy ? ..good work my friend !!

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honest and unpretentious song. Actually works very well and starts to get infectious after a while.
Cheers
Len



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Nice, leisurely guitar strumming, and pleasant chord progression and "pace".

I know you mentioned that this was a lullaby to put you to sleep, but I would still like to hear the vocals more present, up-front in the mix. You have a good voice which could benefit from deeper breathing, vibrate those vocal cords more!

The little accompaniment sounds were a bit too subtle -- maybe bring them up to make a more definitive statement.

This song has a good atmosphere about it. The general style is pleasing to the ear.

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This has a really nice tune, and your voice sounds good in this, Bob.

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.. I agree with Cameron ... with a little production this could be quite the thing .... in addition to a slight push on the vox .... take a deep breath and then boldly let that sound come out .....

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