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I'll be away from recording for a while, so I wanted to put this demo up for my friend Feter.
Sojourner Blues (Feter's Song) is inspired by Feter's story of flight from Iraq to Syria and his life in the uncertain waiting room between worlds. His story as told to me is the basis for the lyrics in this song.
Neil Porter and myself will, down the road a bit, be recording and posting a full band final version.
This one's for you Feter.
Vocal, guitar, harmonica, & piano: Jack Miller
Lyrics:
Sojourner Blues
Neighborhood is boiling tonight,
No sleep to be found.
Another moment to realize, terrorized
My life is going down.
They say it's just a matter of precious time,
As the dust of hell recedes
Before I find some peace of mind.
So they say, so hard to believe.
Well, I've packed a bag, I'm moving on.
Dark sky hides me as I run.
There's no refuge in the desert tonight.
And tomorrow, just the faceless sun.
Deliverence and hope seems so far off.
Don't give me no platitudes.
Traveling west to escape the cloud
But to where, where do you find the good?
We make a dash for the border,
Sigh of relief at last.
Another land, but now a refugee.
I've burned my bridges to the past.
Sleepless night with music as my friend,
In the morning just let me sleep.
Out of place, a non-entity,
Just trying to maintain my keep.
But I know I'm not the only one.
Where there's life, there's light for sure.
Mercy that leads me, follows me home.
The blues of hope for a Sojourner.
© 2007 Jack Miller Music & Lyrics
Hardware:
Martin DM, Hohner harp, Yamaha PSR-293, Shure M57, iBook G3, MobilePre M-Audio
Software:
GarageBand 1
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This is &mdash 11/01/07 - 02:22:20 AM
a very lovely Dylanesque song with very emotive lyrics. I can see a film in Feters' story - guitar slung over his back. Excellent.
Cheers
Len
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A film.... &mdash 11/01/07 - 08:21:49 AM
but, with the rest of the story yet to be played out. I pray for a happy ending. A dear guy, a wonderful musician. I am honored he has shared just a little of his story with me.
Len, thanks for your generous comments.
Jack [ Reply to This ]
We need to keep Feter &mdash 11/01/07 - 09:16:43 AM
in our prayers. May his songs touch the hearts of the sojourners as he makes his way toward freedom. Jack, this is very moving. It makes me realize so much that I take for granted, like a roof over my head, my children whoi are all nearby, and the relative peace and safety of living where I do. Thank you for posting this. Jack. I'm looking forward to the band version. :-) [ Reply to This ]
Your words &mdash 11/06/07 - 06:56:54 AM
express how I feel also. It is impossible to relate to the travail of so many. Thanks. [ Reply to This ]
Very nice! &mdash 11/01/07 - 09:52:55 AM
I'll bet you'll get quite a few Dylan comparisons! I was able to sneak a listen here at work on my powerbook- sounds really good! While I enjoy the simplicity of this recording, I'll be looking forward to hearing what you and Neil do with this. [ Reply to This ]
Hope BD doesn't mind... &mdash 11/06/07 - 09:08:26 AM
Thanks Mikey... I am looking forward to the next version also. After recording this, knowing it was a sketch, I felt so moved by Feter's story (and plight) I just wanted to post it. Good to hear from you.... take care. [ Reply to This ]
Well done! &mdash 11/01/07 - 10:03:51 AM
Nice demo Jack. Feter will be very moved I'm sure. I look forward to the full version!
Be well! [ Reply to This ]
Thanks Mike.... &mdash 11/06/07 - 09:13:06 AM
Great ! &mdash 11/01/07 - 04:52:43 PM
Mr. Jack, a very wonderful piece, loved the music work and loved your vocal. Very touchy story, our prayers with you FETER.. Looking forward for the version with Mr. Neil, i guess it will sound great !
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You said it all... &mdash 11/06/07 - 09:15:04 AM
very nice as is &mdash 11/01/07 - 05:17:24 PM
but also will be looking for the expanded version. friend feter what a great soul and this is a very nice piece. [ Reply to This ]
I gotta say... &mdash 11/06/07 - 09:18:10 AM
you hit the nail on the head referring to Macjams' bluesman from Iraq:
"friend feter what a great soul"
Thanks for stopping in DA. [ Reply to This ]
The story of so many souls &mdash 11/01/07 - 06:51:12 PM
are written in your words Feter. And you Jack. You gave a graceful performance that is true to the meaning of this soulful lament.
My very best to you Feter on your continued journey through life. It is an honor to say I have known you, even if only in a small way, Your music always shines in the glory on God.
Thank you both for sharing this most poignant story in song.
Ed [ Reply to This ]
Great to see.... &mdash 11/06/07 - 11:31:09 AM
how many there are that have Feter in their hearts. Ed, your words express what so many of us feel for this guy. Thanks for chiming in.
Jack [ Reply to This ]
Looking forward &mdash 11/01/07 - 08:15:16 PM
to hearing the final version. I like this the way it is already but it also sounds that there is a lot here to build upon. Nice preview, I can understand why you would want to go ahead and post. Thanks for sharing. [ Reply to This ]
TF... thanks &mdash 11/06/07 - 07:42:59 PM
I appreciate you stopping in on this song. It's simplicity does appeal to me... as a stand alone song. Still, I felt there was more that could be found in do a "larger" version. Neil is one guy who can make that happen.
D [ Reply to This ]
~ &mdash 11/02/07 - 06:58:56 AM
I am very much looking forward to the completed version of this...it's a very powerful song... [ Reply to This ]
powerful story... &mdash 11/06/07 - 07:45:50 PM
Hopefully the story will have another chapter that will turn the sad blues tone of this demo to one of rest and deliverance for our friend.
Thanks Bob. [ Reply to This ]
A good song &mdash 11/02/07 - 07:14:29 AM
well played and sung, which can only brush the edges of what goes on in certain parts of the world. I'm sure all our hearts go out to Feter and others in his situation; a situation which we can't even contemplate. Feter is one person in our sights who I'm sure gives us all inspiration with his strong spirit and happy outlook, regards to both of you, M [ Reply to This ]
Said well... &mdash 11/06/07 - 07:49:34 PM
The song barely scratches the surface of his sojourn... and most amazingly, he is one who doesn't wear his plight on his sleeve. He's an amazing fellow, summed up well in your words:
"Feter is one person in our sights who I'm sure gives us all inspiration with his strong spirit and happy outlook" [ Reply to This ]
I like this already &mdash 11/03/07 - 08:39:08 PM
will be interesting to hear the final. And let's hope Feter will find a oasis in the storm. [ Reply to This ]
Stay tuned... &mdash 11/06/07 - 08:16:40 PM
Vic, thanks for checking in... yes, let's hope that Feter finds a safe harbor... and one with an internet connection (heheh).
D [ Reply to This ]
Fan this! &mdash 11/05/07 - 09:43:11 PM
Dylan? &mdash 11/06/07 - 08:24:16 PM
nice singing &mdash 11/06/07 - 09:32:50 AM
I love the story in this and the simplicity of the guitar and harmonica! Great song! [ Reply to This ]
Thanks EG... &mdash 11/06/07 - 08:35:18 PM
... the story drives the singing and the playing. Nice to know you like all three.
D [ Reply to This ]
Bob. &mdash 11/06/07 - 11:35:59 AM
This is you and Bobby inhabits you in ghostly visitational stylee. Yes I. [ Reply to This ]
I'm starting to get... &mdash 11/07/07 - 07:31:18 AM
... the heebeejeebees.... ghostly visitations and all :)
Maybe there's a little bit of Dylan in all of us.
thanks,jpb! [ Reply to This ]
Nicely done &mdash 11/06/07 - 05:14:11 PM
I pray for peace. Thankfully some escape the terrors.
Nice post,
Doug [ Reply to This ]
Peace... &mdash 02/10/08 - 10:32:17 AM
moving &mdash 11/07/07 - 08:14:35 AM
great playing, great singing, great lyrics. very nicely done, and i love the harmonica. i look forward to the full-band version, but i imagine it will be hard to top this! [ Reply to This ]
this is it.... &mdash 02/10/08 - 10:36:04 AM
Thanks Seca... I don't think there'll be a full band version after all. So this will remain the only version. I am glad you liked it. And thanks for leaving your kind thoughts.
Jack [ Reply to This ]
ojourner Blues (Feter's Song &mdash 02/09/08 - 04:44:12 PM
Thank you Soooo very much for sharing.
'Oh a very fitting tribute for dear Feter ! Such a loving lovely man too.
Thank you again
Actually this needs no comments the words speak for themselves
Harp and strumming guitar is so sad and melancholy but very Beautiful at the same time. so sad. It nearly made me cry..
Peace
Dee.
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SJ blues... &mdash 02/10/08 - 10:38:14 AM
Thank you Dee for stopping in an leaving such thoughtful and generous comments. Feter is indeed a wonderful guy. May his path continue to lead him to safety.
Jack [ Reply to This ]
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