I like what you did with the accordian sound. It adds just the right nocturnal ballad atmosphere. I think I'd take a little of the echo out of my voice so it sounds closer, if that makes sense. I also wonder if the percussion at times could act as a counterpoint to my guitar. There's one heavy downstroke in my playing that might benefit from a beat that doesn't also land on that downstroke. Do you know what I mean? I don't know if that's possible, but it might breakup that repetition. So all this feedback is from my first listen. I listen a few more times and get back to you. Thanks for taking the time to produce. Were you thinking of any other instrumentation?

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I think you're right about that and I'll play with the percussion some more. This was a first pass attempt last night to find the right atmosphere. I'm happy with the accordion and bass. I wasn't thinking of much more instrumentation - I think it's more about finessing the space and balance of these few elements. I considered backing some of your vocals - might be interesting considering the similarity of our voices.

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Will, this is a wonderful song. Boy, your vocals and Bud's are so close, you must be brothers! Ha!

Sounds good. interesting to see where you two plan on taking this.

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"Finally," is right. Big leap for me. Thanks for the good vibe. I think I'm more of a in-the-background lyrics guy. My instrumental skill and musical imagination isn't as strong as my ability to tell a story or capture a feeling. Most of the time I'll leave the music to Bud, but it was fun stepping up to the H2.

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Great work guys, the music is very fine and the vocal is truly fits .. so nice to hear you again sir Will. Loved this piece !

Take Care
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Yeman Auf Al-Rawi

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Look for the final version of the song on Bud's website in a few days.

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you stuffs top Notch my friend !!

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