I love this one. The melody is really memorable. Would
you be interested in having a guest vocalist on one of your
tunes? Check out some of my tracks.....

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Thank you very much! Sure, I am always up for collaborations. When time
admitted I will listen to your songs and see what I have that could make up
for a good match...

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Love the up front vocals, the sound/amp of the guitars,
the build into the chorus, the simplicity. The lyrics are
less storytelling than some of your others, less details
(more generic and less compelling), but this is such an
infectious piece, I really like it. Your guitar solo at the end
has this great slightly twisted unsettled dream quality that
works well. A little distortion in the loudish vocal track,
which goes with the style but consider remixing? Very
good track.

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I think the vocals could be toned down a little. Not just
volume, but they also sound a lot denser than the
background.

Nice guitarwork (in the background :-) though.

V.

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I agree. That's what I meant by loudish vocals and suggested remixing. But
his other songs usually put vocals so far back they were buried, so I was
saying I liked the vocals forward in comparison, but that they were also too
loud, perhaps too forward here (I should have been more specific). But the
forward sound, in general, as a statement, I thought added to the dream
quality of the piece.

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