This would make a great chorus for a song. Hopefully you'll continue this one to a full song.

Like your voice and hope you can find a drummer on MacJams to accompany you or better drum sound, instead of the drum machine sound you have accompanying you here. It takes away from your singing, unless this is what you were going for.

All and all, I think you have a diamond in the rough here ready to add on to.



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Hey Thanks we were trying to go for a "Dance" sound when we started this song but when we record the final version we'll be using a Real drummer lol. Thanks for the positive feedback =]

Poison Valley

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"I've Finally Come" that vocal effect is a little too strong there...takes away from your awesome voice. It works OK in the other spots, but on that line it's distracting.

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thanks for the comment, Are you talking about the Vocoder-ish effect??


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Yeah, I think so. It's the effect that makes your voice sound a little warbled. You really do have a beautiful voice. Melting.

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sweet, a better mix good job again. I'm a sucker for this kind of music. I like the transition/pause/break or whatever you want to call it, in the middle of the song. One thing I would have liked is whatever instruments were playing towards the end after the break to be louder and clearer but over all I liked it...again :)

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I like the synthetic beats. It creates a nice atmosphere. You have a really nice voice.

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I definitely want to hear this as its developed further. I agree Joshosh that at some points the effect on your voice (pitch correcter perhaps?) can be a little overpowering. Other than that it does add to the dance effect.

Glad I happened upon this. nice stuff.

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