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I feel like there still may be something to do with this song. I guess the only way to really know is to give it time and see what people think.Lyrics:
sleep in sweatthis is different than last time always in ways you forget always in ways you forget drown in the city, drown in the sea drown in front of me tarred and feathered, anchored and tethered pulsing and sweating tarred and feathered i don't know you i've met you a whopping one time i think you're keeled over itd be pleasant to be honest drown in the city, drown in the sea drown in front of me tarred and feathered, anchored and tethered pulsing and sweating tarred and feathered i don't think you're scared i think you're keeled over it'd be pleasant to be honest about sleep in sweat this is different than last time always in ways that you forget always in ways you forget drown in the city, drown in the sea drown in front of me tarred and feathered, anchored and tethered pulsing and sweating tarred and feathered tarred and feathered, anchored and tethered pulsing and sweating your stomach is wet like my life is ending like your life is ending like our lives are ending like my life is ending |
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You must be registered and logged-in to comment. Straight Forward or a metaphor? &mdash 12/04/07 - 09:26:24 PM
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Overall I really like it. One thing you might want to do is give this song a release. Have you ever heard the Wilco song Radio Cure? It has a similar repetition throughout. But at the end it moves into another part that is a bit of a release. To me, the whole song is a build up to an explosion, or a climax. That said, this is an "art rock" peice so maybe you want to avoid that and think it's cliche. But I think a release at the end would be extremely cool, then fade back to where it started.
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