a lovely song and I like your vocals a lot. Would definitely be worth re-recording with better production.
Cheers
Len



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thank you! The recording process was as rough as they come. I did the whole thing in about an hour from start to finish (minus writing the poem, which i wrote about a year ago) in my dorm room with no soundproofing and lots of city noise, noisy neighbors, thin walls, etc. Using the macbook mic was new experience for me also. Not excuses, just simply acknowledging that the production is extremely lacking.

butttt, I'm glad you found something nice about the song as a whole. I hope to come back to it sometime and give it another go. thanks again for the listen!

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Like the raw sound and still I wonder what it would or could be if some gear was added to the remix.Perhaps starting as is and then taking off with production added.Fine writing here.Much enjoyed the tune as is.

Blessings,

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Thanks for listening! I do intend to come back to the song in the near future and definitely give it alot more time and attention. I hope you enjoyed it for what it is!
take care

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