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longing (29), love (904), home (43), Iraq (35), Feter (18)
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Description:
Feter of Iraq, stranded in Syria, sent me a snippet of a song sketch. I was a bit uneasy about making a song out of it. I didn't want to take away from or muddy what is so clearly very personally difficult... his song of longing to find his love and a safe harbor to live. Feter, I hope this touches something of the inspiration that sparked your soulful song sketch.
Thank you Feter, for allowing me to work with you on this song.
Feter: Vocal and mandolin
Jack: Vocal, guitar, organ, bass
Lyrics: Feter
Music: Feter and Jack
Lyrics:
The Longing by Feter
Everyone is leaving town
they say they can not not stay
the ocean shore is sending waves
that break upon this bay
it only sees broken heart
longing for a home
longing for that northern wind,
and a face that’s unknown
ah the longing
Hardware:
Martin DM, Yamaha psr-293 keyboard, iBook G3, Shure M57, M-Audio MobilePre
Software:
GarageBand 1
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The Longing &mdash 12/29/07 - 08:55:44 PM
Man ..I dunno what to say .its like imagenary scene
of a pondering .very emotional what ve you done my
friend totaly moved me and its always an honor to
just think we do colab thank you so very much .!!
seems like we need more espresso !!
God Bless
peace ! [ Reply to This ]
Feter... longing &mdash 12/29/07 - 09:07:59 PM
Thank you, my friend. I am just glad you like what I have done. I appreciate you sending the sketch to me and allowing me to make into a song. May your longing come to fruition.
Jack [ Reply to This ]
- &mdash 12/29/07 - 11:13:45 PM
I love the homegrown feel to this.I love the bad quality recording to the beginning and end parts though I've come to like a lower than accepted bitrate of an mp3 - a bit like a scratched record - but the quality of the playing and the song sung is alomost like a wailing song at the beggininnng and end.And it sets the theme.Overall - very mystical in my ears and alot of purple green hues in my minds eye [ Reply to This ]
Homegrown longings... &mdash 12/30/07 - 12:08:25 AM
Mystical Feter, indeed, sets the theme with his intro and completes it with his outro. All I wanted to do was to expand on it and bring it back to him for the finish. Purple green hues in one's eyes says it well, and is what I take to be an amen. So maybe I am in the ballpark.
Thanks much Paddler... very appreciative of your comments. [ Reply to This ]
Very beautiful &mdash 12/29/07 - 11:30:47 PM
Love the transition between the two "parts" of the recording. The genius is that - despite the differences in sound and tone - there is a seamlessness of feeling and emotion that unites them perfectly. Great piece, Feter - music from the soul, and wonderful work, Jack, to create this. Nicely done to both of you. May the New Year bring resolution, and Peace. [ Reply to This ]
Transitions... &mdash 12/30/07 - 12:17:39 AM
Feter-"music from the soul..." indeed.
The transition was the hardest thing for me in this song. To make the two recordings seem to somewhat "belong together" was trickier than I would have imagined. I don't know how well I did in getting there, but...
The emotion part I could feel from Feter's sketch. That it came through in the song for you really is good to know. I was hoping it would.
Thanks much for listening. And may you have a New Year of peace and joy. [ Reply to This ]
absolutely beautiful &mdash 12/30/07 - 11:06:18 AM
I could completely copy and paste David's comment here above. The two different parts are glued so seamlessly together. A brilliant idea to bring Feter back in the outro again. This is emotions carried on both your sleeves. Big bravo!
-Walt [ Reply to This ]
Thanks... &mdash 12/30/07 - 12:35:57 PM
Walter, it is gratifying to read your comments. Thank you. At first I was going to repeat the entire intro at the outro. Then it hit me to just include "ah, the longing..." That is the moment in the song I like best.
I've done one other collab with Feter on another of his unfinished songs. He puts so much of his heart and soul into his music... it rubs off. And this is a good way for him to still get some of his music "out there" as he is now without instruments or recording facilities.
Again, thanks for listening.
Jack
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Hey well rounded Clab &mdash 12/30/07 - 11:12:17 AM
Feter's vocals reminds me of early Leonard Cohen for some reason...really cool Clab! [ Reply to This ]
Much thanks... &mdash 12/30/07 - 12:48:43 PM
I am sure Feter is flattered to hear the apt comparison of his vocal to Leonard Cohen. Good to know you liked the collab.
cheers! [ Reply to This ]
Good! &mdash 12/30/07 - 12:47:09 PM
What a good song reeking with high emotion. Love that harmonica! Great guitar and vocals. Thanks for sharing! [ Reply to This ]
Emotion... &mdash 12/30/07 - 01:39:25 PM
... a guitar, and a harmonica: the makings of a song. We're glad to know you thought it was a good one, Brandaman.
Thanks for listening and for your generous comments. [ Reply to This ]
How appropriate &mdash 12/30/07 - 05:13:43 PM
it's a bit of a tear jerker for me.
I don't quite know what to say; really... [ Reply to This ]
I hear ya, Harold... &mdash 12/30/07 - 05:38:21 PM
What a &mdash 12/30/07 - 06:08:15 PM
very emotional sound to Feter's voice and you have done him proud Jack. Excellent.
Cheers
Len
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Feter... &mdash 12/30/07 - 09:09:27 PM
He sings it well. I was just following his lead. He's the leader of this collab. I'm just glad to be included.
Much thanks, len.
Jack [ Reply to This ]
Fabulous &mdash 12/30/07 - 06:19:57 PM
I have to agree with David - the transition between the parts is seamless despite the huge difference in sound quality. Exceptional production and performance. A wonderful piece.
Peter [ Reply to This ]
Peter... &mdash 12/30/07 - 09:12:38 PM
Thank you for your very generous comments. I don't know what else to say in response. I know Feter is very moved by the response to this song.
cheers...
Jack [ Reply to This ]
longing &mdash 12/30/07 - 08:17:42 PM
heartfelt feel and emotional song. nice.
Really like how a transition melds these two parts. The organ is a nice touch.
While I was listening I kept thinking it would be great if Feter's part would be reprised... and sure enough, there it is. [ Reply to This ]
The Reprise... &mdash 12/30/07 - 09:22:20 PM
When I was thinking about putting this snippet of Feter's into a song, I pretty much knew I would lead with his song sketch. the idea of a reprise came to mind fairly soon... The work was to blend it with what I wanted to do on my part. The organ came about as I realized there needed to be more to fill out the song... and the same with the bass. Both helped make the initial transition at the beginning.
Thanks Vic for stopping and listening and leaving your thoughts... you're a goodwilly (no offense intended :) [ Reply to This ]
Collaborastic guys! &mdash 12/30/07 - 09:03:36 PM
Man, I've really been missing out by being so scarce lately! This is some real calming and searching stuff! The amount of talent floating around in here is mind blowing to say the least! We should be the ones skimming off the cream, so to speak! The mainstream is full of corn eyed brown trout, if you ask me. Nicely done gents, nicely done indeed!
Ax [ Reply to This ]
Collaborastic &mdash 12/31/07 - 09:43:36 AM
We'll take that adjective for this song any day. Thanks Ax!
I know what you mean about the treasures of talent here at MJ... I am blown away and humbled by it all.
Much thanks again for taking time to listen. Happy New Year to you. [ Reply to This ]
Nothing you can do! &mdash 12/30/07 - 09:15:10 PM
Just one of those things that touches your soul. Great job of weaving
yourself in and out of this Dadai. Just Great! [ Reply to This ]
Sincere... &mdash 12/31/07 - 11:18:14 AM
thank you, Droop. Soul touching through music is compliment enough. Credit to Feter.
and welcome to MJ. [ Reply to This ]
It &mdash 12/31/07 - 01:02:06 AM
is a wonderfully moving song and well put together . Ive said it before and Ill keep sayin it . If its got a harp in it I love it ! Great song and sound guys . [ Reply to This ]
Harp & love... &mdash 12/31/07 - 04:42:44 PM
Much thanks for your comments, Dj. It is amazing how Feter's soulful sketch and my add-on has struck a chord. Like I said before, I am just glad to be a part of it.
cheers. [ Reply to This ]
impressive &mdash 12/31/07 - 09:39:12 AM
Both recordings are unique and stand on their own very well. The contrast between Feter's sparse recording with just the mandolin and his voice against your take is very well done. How you let the organ snuggle up on your guitar and song.... and how it transforms to a dylan'ish setting.
You both sing with gusto and leaves me wishing it lasted longer.
Very beautiful. I think this is one of the best productions and performances I have in my Dadai collection. [ Reply to This ]
lasting longer... &mdash 12/31/07 - 04:46:42 PM
They say always keep them wanting more? :)
Thor... your comments really gave me a good feeling. Thanks.
Nothing else to really say... just much thanks.
Jack [ Reply to This ]
wow! &mdash 12/31/07 - 10:01:11 AM
Thank you Jim... &mdash 12/31/07 - 04:51:46 PM
I really appreciate your comments. And I know Feter does too.
cheers. [ Reply to This ]
Oh Wow... &mdash 12/31/07 - 12:36:08 PM
The way Feter's soulful delivery blends in with Jack's performance is perfect. The lyrics just really tear at you and make you feel that longing feeling we've all had to some degree or another at some point in our lives. I love the way it's book ended with Feter's original sketch. It really helps punctuate the emotion.
A wonderful tune, Feter, and, Jack, you really handled it with the care that it needed and deserved. [ Reply to This ]
Bookends... &mdash 01/01/08 - 09:47:16 AM
...and blending. It really is about blending in with Feter and allowing the song's theme and conclusion be set by him. I am glad you and others think it worked. Thanks for the generous comments.
cheers [ Reply to This ]
incredible &mdash 12/31/07 - 03:45:03 PM
this is so nice, you did a great job with this Feter sketch (I think the guy is a genius, I would have been uneasy too).you really did a nice job filling this out, kind of Neil Young-ish in a way. perfect instrumentation and I too love the less than perfect sound at the beginning of the song. i only wish it would have gone on longer. [ Reply to This ]
thank u &mdash 12/31/07 - 04:31:21 PM
for sharing this. the song is like gleaning some deep wisdom from an itinerant minstrel. it is timeless. [ Reply to This ]
a minstrel... &mdash 01/02/08 - 03:53:15 PM
indeed, Feter is a minstrel and an itinerant one at that. Thanks from both of us for your generous comments. I'm glad you liked what we put together. [ Reply to This ]
michael2... &mdash 01/02/08 - 03:37:10 PM
Thanks much. I have already commented about as much as I have to say on the song. I will echo your sentiments regarding Feter. He is an amazing musician and songwriter. And, aside from a Dylan comparison, Neil Young reference makes my day (nothing like day dreams, eh?). Also, it's very satisfying to know that you think the instrumentation fits Feter's sketch.
Again, thanks for taking the time to listen and comment. [ Reply to This ]
right then &mdash 12/31/07 - 11:32:05 PM
beautiful &mdash 01/01/08 - 03:21:56 PM
Thank you... &mdash 01/02/08 - 03:56:00 PM
Mysti. I appreciated you stopping in and leaving those comments.
cheers [ Reply to This ]
wow &mdash 01/01/08 - 03:52:34 PM
The combo of the start and then your interpertation. very clever! Sounds very heartfelt and real Great song!! [ Reply to This ]
Heartfelt thanks... &mdash 01/02/08 - 11:14:27 PM
sometimes things just come together. Glad to know you think this one did.
Again, much thanks. [ Reply to This ]
This is... &mdash 01/01/08 - 04:40:00 PM
...... &mdash 01/02/08 - 11:16:36 PM
I appreciate your comments, Bob... a few words can often say a lot. Yours do.
Thanks. [ Reply to This ]
u never know...could b u! &mdash 01/01/08 - 11:46:51 PM
Well... &mdash 01/02/08 - 11:12:18 PM
yes... but one hopes not... and at the same time has hopes for Feter.
Thanks for listening! [ Reply to This ]
Difficult job done really well Jack! &mdash 01/02/08 - 06:27:49 PM
Feter's lead in sets this up beautifully, and I think you've done him justice in your interpretation Jack. I think the two of you sound good together - this has a lovely feel to it.
Neil [ Reply to This ]
Always appreciative... &mdash 01/04/08 - 09:36:49 PM
... of your take, Neil. I think this song works and am pleased with how it turned out... but it's a shame that it is all too real to Feter. I know you know. Thanks.
Jack [ Reply to This ]
Excellent job of working from Feter's &mdash 01/02/08 - 06:28:01 PM
sketch - perfect arrangement and instrumentation and your delivery is right on. Great collab. [ Reply to This ]
You're a bud.... &mdash 01/04/08 - 11:10:45 PM
wow... &mdash 01/02/08 - 10:46:44 PM
This is a home run! Love the simplicity and restraint -- you kept it sparse at let the lyrics blossom throughout. Great voice, perfect harp (harder to do than most people think!), clean guitar work, don't change a think. Tremendous effort, really enjoyed it!
Peace,
Paul [ Reply to This ]
Thank you Paul... &mdash 01/08/08 - 08:39:42 PM
Your comments are very gratifying to read. That's all... just really satisfying to read how this song connected with you.
cheers! [ Reply to This ]
nice &mdash 01/03/08 - 09:52:18 AM
Nice segue from the original to your added beautification of an already sincere work.
Great idea, and I'm sure you could even expand further if you wanted, even more instruments in the mix. The spaciousness allows for so many things.
Wonderful. [ Reply to This ]
Much thanks, Damien.. &mdash 02/10/08 - 10:55:16 AM
It's great to see and read all the responses. Your ideas show how much one could do... much appreciated.
Jack [ Reply to This ]
Big &mdash 01/03/08 - 03:05:34 PM
Really very nice smash up. Feter's recording has the totally raw and real sound of a 1950's field recording on the old Nonesuch label. And yet, it's strangely contemporary a la Devendra Banhardt et al.
The music you added, Jack, is very sensitively handled (nice pipes, too).
This is a beautiful track. [ Reply to This ]
Smash up review... &mdash 02/11/08 - 10:33:15 AM
Sonny Jim, thanks for the generous words on the song. It's interesting to read the connections you make on how the song sounds. It amazes me how this song has connected with so many. Take care! [ Reply to This ]
Easily the most &mdash 01/03/08 - 08:38:32 PM
anguish and pain ever exhibited on a song at Macjams! Feter's sketch is hauntingly beautiful. Jack, me thinks you made this production appear to be more simple than it is. Truly an outstanding job and easily one of the most unique collaborations I've heard. Kudos to you both!
Adam [ Reply to This ]
Nice collab... &mdash 01/04/08 - 02:15:20 PM
...and one of Feter's BEST vocal deliveries to date. Sung with pathos and conviction. Nice guitar and harmonica work Jack, along with your usual exceptional singing style.
Great stuff guys...
Be well! [ Reply to This ]
Sorry to take so long, Jack... &mdash 01/06/08 - 11:58:38 AM
I've been having a bit of iMac trouble....
I think you've succeeded in working with the original Feter track, and bringing it up a notch while preserving what is so arresting in it in the first place...
Really sets a standard for sensitive collaboration...
Ed [ Reply to This ]
sensitive collaboration... &mdash 01/15/08 - 09:09:05 PM
Thanks Ed. That is mainly what I was trying to do. I wasn't sure if the collab would come across as a unified song to the listener. Or if it would seem like me "making my own song" off of Feter's heartfelt sketch. So I appreciate your comments.
Jack [ Reply to This ]
Wow... &mdash 01/09/08 - 02:04:37 PM
I am late in commenting, due to my email notification not working. This is very moving, Feter, and Jack, you did the words justice with the music. Very good plaintive harmonica that adds to the feel of the song. You both make me feel The Longing in this touching song. [ Reply to This ]
Fetersong... &mdash 02/29/08 - 11:17:42 AM
and I am late in replying. Feter, of course sets the entire mood with his intro... the rest just seemed to follow and fit. Feeling the longing was what I was hoping for... glad to know the song did that for you.
Jack [ Reply to This ]
Warmth lifts &mdash 01/15/08 - 10:00:38 PM
Well integrated. Middle East meets Far West. Destinies intermingled in the ethereal cross winds. A warm song. Kudos, gentlemen. [ Reply to This ]
Very &mdash 01/19/08 - 08:02:29 PM
well done &mdash 01/22/08 - 09:47:18 PM
wonderful job of adding a full sound to feter's simple tale.
feter, i'm so glad you still sing in your deep dark beautiful voice - even tho the song is mournful.
good job of supporting that with the guitar. this reminded me a bit of the sad sad Whale Song by CS&N. "longing for a home" - way to sing it, jack.
i yearned for one more measure of feter "longing" with your instrumental at end before he went back to his orig strum. but i'm a happy customer! i enjoyed your partnership, brother boys!
anne
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Whew &mdash 02/10/08 - 12:58:18 AM
This is a straight to the heart production. Tastefully put together with great authenticity. Thanks guys for sharing!
Be well,
Doug [ Reply to This ]
Great &mdash 02/16/08 - 01:23:20 PM
Wow... When the other instruments starts to play, it sounds great... Good voices... Fits together... Great collab... [ Reply to This ]
Great! &mdash 03/03/08 - 07:45:38 AM
This is a great song by all means, the intro with Feter's vocal and mandolin is very nice and then when the guitar comes in with the harmonica and the bass, organ line .. JUST WOW!
As Jiguma said : "Difficult job done really well Jack".
I'm speechless, your vocals are just powerful. Thanks for sharing such an art.
Take Care
- Yeman A. Al-Rawi [ Reply to This ]
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of a pondering .very emotional what ve you done my
friend totaly moved me and its always an honor to
just think we do colab thank you so very much .!!
seems like we need more espresso !!
God Bless
peace !
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