Like the build up on this some of the back ground leads in the start are realy good. I like the looseness of the guitar . When the singing starts it gets intense but then its over. I see you are working on this cant wait for the finish!

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i'll finish it, i was just really digging how it was coming along so i thought i'd post it before i did the real drums and the rest of the song.

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Wo ..man this rock ..I liked your guitar work alot !!
surely 70s feel ..realy would like to hear the final
mix ..maybe more work at the drums for off beats so
the rethym can sound more groovey just some tips
nothing more ..thnx for sharin !!

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yeah, the drums are really just a metronome at this point, but i'm going to add some cool drums in the final mix.

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You've got some great ideas for arranging here. I like the distorted guitar lead. Makes me think of "The Guess Who" from the 70s.

Vocal reminds me of "Smokin' In The Boys Room" by Brownsville Station. And a little touch of Robert Plant.

An excellent foundation here for what I'm sure will turn out to be a very good song. Your vocals are just right for this kind of song.

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