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| MissChaos said 1893 days ago (September 20th, 2004) | |
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ambient to pop? I was surprised when the song turned from rather ambient to more articulate. I really liked that breathy intro, but I think that drum track is really stale. Even the piano sounded shallow compared to that intro... Perhaps some reverb and echo on the piano would help it blend into the intro more. I like the chord progression, but the sounds aren't fully blending yet, in my opinion. At one point, you have some very pretty chimes, but then they cut out really abruptly. I hope this comment helps some. Good job! Miss Chaos Check out my latest song called Mama Cries - Album Version (MJRF)
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| the dennex donor said 1890 days ago (September 23rd, 2004) | |
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i likes it ! don't worry too much about blending the sounds . . . they sound great as they are ! over production is killing art ! i particularly like the 'cutting off' of the chimes sound . . . gives a kind of reverse feeling in the track (fitting in nicely with the title) keep on trucking ! dennex Check out my latest song called flashback
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| jazzeroo said 1888 days ago (September 25th, 2004) | |
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Way to go. I love how this song has such a slow, pretty melody yet has that cool beat just underneath. I'm not good enough with this GarageBand stuff to say anything about production but I do know when I like something, and I like this. Check out my latest song called Mellow Dramitic
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| _nderscore said 1877 days ago (October 6th, 2004) | |
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great first post! seems like a classical song with a high-tech twist. frankly, i would like to hear more 'tech' since those were the sounds that made it interesting for me. the song is put together really well, however-nice composition. looking forward to your other stuff Check out my latest song called glyd
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| Epileptic Gibbon said 1820 days ago (December 2nd, 2004) | |
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The first song is special The first song you do with Garage Band is always going to be special and I'm glad you enjoyed working on it. This starts off well but doesn't go anywhere particularly exciting, at least not for a piece of progressive/art rock. Good first try, though. Check out my latest song called Fiddler Off the Roof w/Komrade K & Caroline
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oldlibmike
I like it! Can see where vocals would be nice. Its very
soothing. Never sure how to rate vocal songs though...is it
the production or the voice being rated? I tend to look for
instrumentals..just so I can be envious!