The title, the vibe %u2013 everything speaks of an epic tale being told. Great suspension. You kept me wanting more through every second. Only thing... I wonder if you could thicken up the piano or try changing the instrument for that main melody. However, near the middle and end, you soften it up and veer off toward a soft, yet stunning ambience, where the piano fits in perfectly. And the way you developed into those brief, high chords was masterful. This song %u2013 truly full of soul. It's rare to hear something with this much feeling nowadays. Bravo!

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Thanks for the comments, I had tried switching the main melody to strings about halfway through but it just didn't sound right, any suggestions?

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Do you have words for it? If you can't find someone better qualified to do the vocal tracks, drop me a note! I really dig what you got going on with this. It has loads of potential! A little guitar might be nice in the distance from time to time? Just a thought. solid foundation at any rate. Thanks for sharing.

Ax

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with the general soungscape you have there perhaps using a "voicebox " and the modulation on the piano "
would give it that edge and organic feel in subtle ammount ,..
just a thought ,..
p.s. voiceboxes can either baught ,. or hand made for under 20 dollars ,.. check out voicebox on youtube for an idea of the exapsion possible,.. and a general feel of where it could come into play

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Nice tune, I like that sounds!;)
CharlyDee(C)

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Thanks for the last couple comments guys, I've been working with Axgrinder on some variations of this. I'm excited to see what he comes up with. We're thinking about vocals as well, I don't know that I have the correct equipment for a voicebox, but I will take a look into it. Thanks again for the input; glad you enjoyed the song!

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