Not bad at all.

I like your lead melodies and the melodic harmonies are very nicely done. The sparseness of the instruments is also a nice touch in places, but I have to admit that in places I thought the track could've used more power and a fuller sound.
Especially when you return to the main chorus after the little bridge (at the 1:30 mark). The classic accelerating bass drum makes you expect the track to 'explode', so to speak, but it kinda left me unfulfilled.

I think it could be easily fixed with just a little more powerful drums and maybe another synth pad (a tad deeper than the other one).

That's what I think, anyway.

But but nonetheless, this was a nice listen and this really has some potential.

-Einar S.

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Thanks a bunch for the input. This was something I wrote a while back but thought needed something. When I went to adjust it to try and add some more I just ended up fine-tuning the original one to flow better. I couldn't really find anything I'd like to add at the end so I wanted to just post it and get some input. Drums would definitely be a could one, although the kit I used is a tad limited. I'll look for a deeper synth pad as well. Again thanks a bunch!

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