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On Fire by tjayswift [Email]

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SONG STATS:
Hits: 483
Comments: 9
Votes: 3
Plays: 36
Last Played: Jul 09, 2008 - 07:45:20 PM
Downloads: 24
Fans: 7
Uploaded: Feb 04, 2008 - 11:24:31 AM
Last Updated: Feb 03, 2008 - 03:02:18 AM
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Keywords:
rock (1109), alternative (241), moody (38), dramatic (24), guitar solo (110)
Description:
Original song, written in 06, I still toy with redoing the vocals from time to time, and adding real drums. The drum track that you hear was initally something I threw together just to get the song structure nailed down, but I liked the way they sounded, so I added the cymbals and left it as is.

Lyrics:
i still believe in this
i know your emotions were real
i meant those words i said
now what do i do
to prove that i'm here

you still set me on fire
you still burn me with desire
you can't walk away from this
because you still want a part of me

your fear is natural
let go for once and trust your heart
i gave my all to you
i'm not a fleeting thought
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At the first note &mdash 02/04/08 - 03:18:32 PM
When I heard the first note I knew this was good. Great song and pretty well-produced. I mean the drums are good and real enough. I guess you could use a few fills, but that would be knit-picking. Very good song!
Dave

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Wow! &mdash 02/04/08 - 04:24:03 PM
This is brilliant! I was hooked from the first note! good job man. When the guitar first came in at the begining I thought it sounded a bit Mark Knofler. I think the vocals could benefit from a remix, as some of the backing vocals in the chorus are louder than the main vox. But the actually song is first class.
Adam

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really &mdash 02/04/08 - 04:35:32 PM
impressive piece of songwriting and all around delivery. Love the tone on your axe, sweet pickin'. Welcome to MacJams, we'll all look forward to some more of your work, thanks for sharing it with us.


. - Harold

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On Fire &mdash 02/04/08 - 05:16:25 PM
Ginat guitar work ...the bass boomin and range
is top notch ..I can see you worked hard on the
vocaling and harmonies ..great song thnx
for sharin !!!!

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Very tasteful &mdash 02/04/08 - 08:14:32 PM
Really nice guitar work.

The mix has some rough edges (the background vox, as mentioned above) but the whole thing is a pleasure to listen to.

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great &mdash 02/05/08 - 02:50:54 PM
really nice song. i agree with everyone else: the drums are fine, but you could do with a remix on the vox. they are getting a little buried. IMHO you might want them a little dryer too, there seems to be a chorus or something on them; your voice is nice enough to warrant the loud, proud and just a touch of reverb approach. great job.

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Spacey &mdash 02/06/08 - 12:09:55 AM
Great guitar work and a nice widescreen feel. The vox are lovely and delicate. Agree the vox need some mix work, but its a great chorus, man.

s

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coooooool. &mdash 02/08/08 - 11:22:53 AM
love the guitar work in this one. great song.

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youre a &mdash 02/09/08 - 01:22:41 AM
great player! cool song

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