how weird is that... slimy writhing lyrics swim in my brain listening to this, and want to slither out... this is a very cool sound bed (OK, almost all of your stuff is...) but this has some nice dark twisty passages that are begging for singing and whispers. I have some ideas. I also have no time, so don't hold your breath... but... hmmm.... You should work on this one more, prep an ending. I think this one needs some vox.
ttfn,
Drakonis

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Hi Drak! It's nice to see you back here commenting and giving me good input again. :^) I agree that some slimy, writhing lyrics would suit this tune very well. I would love to hear some of your ideas. I realise that you have limited time, but maybe you could put your ideas here on this page, so that if anyone is interested in implementing those ideas on this track, they could do so. It's just an idea, but that sounds great. Thanks again, Eduard for your input. Much appreciated! Be well!

-Richard

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I really like this just as it Stands very infectious
rythmem -I would keep it as it is. just my opinion

love it. Sometimes less tracks is best. Another one for my Ipod.
Thanks

Dee.

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Hello and thanks for coming by! Drak has some surprises for this track, so stay tuned for something cool!

-Boris Luxx

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potential here. I feel there does need to be some vocals on it, maybe a gary numan kind of voice? I'd also put some rocking guitar in there somewhere, but thats just me!

Adam

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Hey man! Thanks for coming by for a listen. Thanks for your kind word too!

-Boris Luxx

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I know Chevy would have loved jammin to it, riding behind the HASMAT truck!

I hear ya on the genres, they never seem to have all of them you need.

. - Harold

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Thanks for coming by!

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perfectly done ... it reminds of German Industrial/Electronica bands like "In strict confidence" or "Project Pitchfork. Yes, vox would be nice!


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Thanks for all of your kind words. I am a fan of German bands myself and I guess it shows sometimes in my own tracks. I have so many influences, that one could hear just about all of them in any one of my tracks, to be honest. I think my music is a huge mix of them, all combined into a one-man-band and his Mac. LOL Take good care, Alex! Thanks again!

-Boris Luxx

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same with me ... kind of "we are what we eat".

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i really like this. what a cool soundbed. moves, has a lot of energy and is still very subtle. really great mix too. you did a great job on this. first time that i've heard your stuff. i'll be back for more.

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Big sounds Rich - Eduard's slimy writhing lyrics (with vocals to match of course) would definitely work. Does sound somehow incomplete, but I think it's a vocal that I'm not hearing.
Walter (moorlandt) could have a great time on this I imagine - with his deeeeeep voice and maybe even some sax.
Just a thought.
It really is an interesting, driving sound bed you've got there though. Excellent production.
Best wishes from Oz!
Neil

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...diggin the vibe here borrisluxx...crisp and haunting!!!

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Wonderful Music here . VERY Good -lissening now..

Have You heard Drakonis collabsong on this w RoxyLee& You ? Perhaps that's what was missin'.. Lol !! I find this complete as it is -don't feel it misses ANYTHING : ) Its GRAND the way it is . Genre....lol Gothic Rock ? The Genres are always confusing because sometimes You may miss some because You maynot 'like' the genre & ViceVersa !(!) Genresystem not good but what to do about it ? Perhaps have like ten 'big' genres or somethin'with smaller 'undergroups' lol...! Well THANKS FOR THIS ITS REALLY GOOD !
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TOXIC DESIRE Drakonis/RoxyLee/You ! http://www.macjams.com/song/40611


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...Mad Max should be speeding in a car while this is playing!

I like this!

as for anything it may/may not need....vocoder'ed vocals possibly, I dunno....but I am liking the thick bassline quite a bit

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