...I really love this, whoever you are....

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it fits the tune right... I sense there is a great voice behind it... 'A friend of mine' directed me over here - thanks Bob! :D

Let's hear more!

. - Harold

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you put together - very cool - and the music is really well structured and original. If this is experimenting I can't wait to hear what happens when you really get down to work. Very impressive.

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a very good voice. Maybe some musical talent runs in your family?
Keep on singing and post some more of your songs.
Not sure about your artist name though :)



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Okay, so you definitely have a wonderful musical ear and I love your voice and sense of melody. Would love to hear your voice without so many effects on it next time, because you can really sing, obviously.

Great work and I'm looking forward to the next one!

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on butterflies and dragonflies by guitapick....

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But it works in a strange way....

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I think the melody, or maybe melodies, that you're singing across the groove is really right and really great...

I think the vocal effect(s), which seems to include the pitch correcting thing used as an effect, is neat in this context. I'm with ledeb, though, in being eager to hear your natural voice in another song on another day...

I like the 'heartbreak-over-funk' lyrics... You might like to listen to the MacJams work of SlimGirlFat, who sometimes operates in a similar territory... But, yes, the lyrics are good, and the sense that you didn't bind your lyrical sense to some arbitrary form really works here...

Little crits...There are a couple points where it seems like there's a little whisper of distortion...seems like a little more in my left earphone than the right... Might be the way a loop is sliced, or it could just be something in the mix getting too hot... Although the mix as a whole doesn't seem like the level is all that high...

And beyond that, a minute fourteen is just too short... I'll await the extended dance remix...

Great beginning. Welcome to MacJams...

Ed

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tanks for the recommendations and stuffs. Actually most of that was my regular voice... and i used no tuning... i was just experimenting with some random thing.... i will try to make it longer. again thank u.

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this is really good!!....really good

now, hear me clearly....you DO NOT want to be a child star. This causes one's life to be a big mess o trouble. But I bet if you hone this gift (and this song shows a GREAT gift) when you are a bit older, you will be able to have a career in music.

Please accept my total respect for this cool piece you created. Practice, and write some more please.

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Wait a sec, who's a child!!?? I am not a child!!!

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with great things to come I suspect.

I really like how you used a non traditional type of melody to go with your lyrics, it added an interesting quality.

As with the others, I look forward to hearing more of your projects.

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Short and sweet. I really want to hear the extended version. Especially since I really started to dig that flute sound and then the song stopped. I agree with the SlimGirlFat direction... It'd be neat to hear you both on a song. I can only imagine that with such a virtuoso dad, that there is plenty of talent running through you, girl. Go on with your rock star self! Looking forward to more of your music.

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