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Not Any More


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garner_smake

 Genre: Electropop

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I was experimenting with garage band and i got this.
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Lyrics
i used to
believe you
when you said
you'd be coming back

but now i've got enough
energy
untrustworthiness
to give you a slap

i'm not trying
not anymore
you're not lying
not anymore
I'm not dying
i'm not going to cry
when you walk out the door
not anymore
not anymore
Song Stats
Hits: 1018
Comments: 13
Fans: 7
Plays: 126
Downloads: 58
Votes: 7
Uploaded: Feb 08, 2008 - 05:38:09 PM
Last Updated: Feb 09, 2008 - 05:12:11 PM Last Played: Oct 03, 2009 - 03:31:08 PM
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Hardware:
macbook
Software:
garageband4.0.0
Comments
guitapick said 639 days ago (February 8th, 2008)
Hehhehheh...
...I really love this, whoever you are....
Check out my latest song called Outside the Corral
said 639 days ago (February 8th, 2008)
vox effect
it fits the tune right... I sense there is a great voice behind it... 'A friend of mine' directed me over here - thanks Bob! :D

Let's hear more!

. - Harold
bud said 639 days ago (February 8th, 2008)
Great tune - I really like the vocal effect
you put together - very cool - and the music is really well structured and original. If this is experimenting I can't wait to hear what happens when you really get down to work. Very impressive.
Check out my latest song called Expanding Toys (Halloween Remix)
said 639 days ago (February 8th, 2008)
you have
a very good voice. Maybe some musical talent runs in your family?
Keep on singing and post some more of your songs.
Not sure about your artist name though :)
ledebutant said 639 days ago (February 8th, 2008)
More Please
Okay, so you definitely have a wonderful musical ear and I love your voice and sense of melody. Would love to hear your voice without so many effects on it next time, because you can really sing, obviously.

Great work and I'm looking forward to the next one!
Check out my latest song called Black Star (MJ Live Aid w/jgurner)
garner_smake said 639 days ago (February 9th, 2008)
i also sang...
on butterflies and dragonflies by guitapick....
said 639 days ago (February 8th, 2008)
Wierd
But it works in a strange way....
Ed Hannifin said 639 days ago (February 9th, 2008)
Well put together....
I think the melody, or maybe melodies, that you're singing across the groove is really right and really great...

I think the vocal effect(s), which seems to include the pitch correcting thing used as an effect, is neat in this context. I'm with ledeb, though, in being eager to hear your natural voice in another song on another day...

I like the 'heartbreak-over-funk' lyrics... You might like to listen to the MacJams work of SlimGirlFat, who sometimes operates in a similar territory... But, yes, the lyrics are good, and the sense that you didn't bind your lyrical sense to some arbitrary form really works here...

Little crits...There are a couple points where it seems like there's a little whisper of distortion...seems like a little more in my left earphone than the right... Might be the way a loop is sliced, or it could just be something in the mix getting too hot... Although the mix as a whole doesn't seem like the level is all that high...

And beyond that, a minute fourteen is just too short... I'll await the extended dance remix...

Great beginning. Welcome to MacJams...

Ed
garner_smake said 638 days ago (February 9th, 2008)
thanks
tanks for the recommendations and stuffs. Actually most of that was my regular voice... and i used no tuning... i was just experimenting with some random thing.... i will try to make it longer. again thank u.
ziti said 637 days ago (February 11th, 2008)
wow, my pal ava
this is really good!!....really good

now, hear me clearly....you DO NOT want to be a child star. This causes one's life to be a big mess o trouble. But I bet if you hone this gift (and this song shows a GREAT gift) when you are a bit older, you will be able to have a career in music.

Please accept my total respect for this cool piece you created. Practice, and write some more please.
Check out my latest song called Stepping Down
garner_smake said 636 days ago (February 11th, 2008)
hey!!!
Wait a sec, who's a child!!?? I am not a child!!!
damiengh said 635 days ago (February 12th, 2008)
teasing us
with great things to come I suspect.

I really like how you used a non traditional type of melody to go with your lyrics, it added an interesting quality.

As with the others, I look forward to hearing more of your projects.
Check out my latest song called Tea and Scones
MissChaos said 635 days ago (February 13th, 2008)
Great, Ava!!
Short and sweet. I really want to hear the extended version. Especially since I really started to dig that flute sound and then the song stopped. I agree with the SlimGirlFat direction... It'd be neat to hear you both on a song. I can only imagine that with such a virtuoso dad, that there is plenty of talent running through you, girl. Go on with your rock star self! Looking forward to more of your music.
Check out my latest song called Mama Cries - Album Version (MJRF)
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Electropop (also called Technopop) is a subgenre of synth pop music which flourished during the early 1980s, although the first recordings were made in the late 1970s. Numerous bands have carried on the electropop tradition into the 1990s and 2000s.

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