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| guitapick said 655 days ago (February 9th, 2008) | |
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What Ed said... really sweet tune ...and: I play electric guitar and L-O-V-E special effects...as well as the straight sound...(bet ya knew that)... So: always happy to hear your "real" voice and glad you posted this...but there's a place for the outside stuff, too... Uh-oh...do I hear my electronic schoolmarm's footsteps...? Check out my latest song called Outside the Corral
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| drakonis said 654 days ago (February 9th, 2008) | |
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I like it... cute and fresh style. Not only do I enjoy the bouncy backing music idea, but I'm really intrigued by your syncopated singing on this, the timing is what makes this a treat. I agree with Ed (EJH) above that your voice could come up a little in volume here, you have a nice singing voice, so don't be shy to boost it a bit. Also, I can hear noticeable clicks as you cut/edit your vocal parts... as you learn more you will find out how to smooth those out a little more so they are not so noticeable. This has great promise, and I hope you work on it more... sounds cool! Welcome to Macjams! ttfn, Drakonis Check out my latest song called Lullaby for the Inner Child
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| Feter said 654 days ago (February 9th, 2008) | |
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Prince Charm Does Exist this is charmin ..your vocie ..your song writing the piano work is marvelous ...all what it need a bit of work with the mixing and the effects ... else its charmin up beat song ..curious to hear how its gonna sound at the final take ! Check out my latest song called A Night With Feter feat'(Roxylee sloparts crissew johnwhitehead and Yamin AL Yamani )
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| VicDiesel said 653 days ago (February 10th, 2008) | |
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This song ought to have a warning label "Will instantly chase away bad moods" This is one of the more sunny and cheerful songs I've come across in quite a while. Fun stuff! Check out my latest song called Desert Stars
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| caroline said 653 days ago (February 10th, 2008) | |
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fresh, clean - woohoo you have a wonderful voice and this is a sweet and catchy tune -bravo - watch out lily allen!! i look forward to hearing more - thank you Check out my latest song called clink that link mjrf
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| saymme said 653 days ago (February 11th, 2008) | |
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8 ) Lalalalla : ) : ) TX for this LOVE IT lol I really do . . Hahhahahahaha ; ) You remind me of Ledebutant...be sure to check her out & THANKYOU lenaxx |
| droop said 653 days ago (February 11th, 2008) | |
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Very unique and I like it. Such a happy little thing. Very nice. Check out my latest song called Last Teardrop
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| buckhorn said 652 days ago (February 11th, 2008) | |
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this is charming. Certainly nothing to be shameful of, on the contrary. Its your work and your self expression and I found it very appealing. Regards Check out my latest song called salience #2
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| thetiler said 652 days ago (February 12th, 2008) | |
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Cut pic love the sound of your voice. I am a true sucker for such young sweet sounds. It's almost like you can sing anything and pull it off in a pop direction. You have that natural gift! Check out my latest song called The Bluebird Cafe (with two other guest)
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| ziti said 648 days ago (February 16th, 2008) | |
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this so great and the version droop did id really great. I heard this one second...and it is just as great....the funny awkward cuts only enhance this my dear.... you are one talented lady. your voice is so in tune, and has a wonderful mature quality that surprises me and thrills me quite a lot. You seem to be enjoying making music ava, and I hope for my sake, you make alot more. Don't go getting a big head now, and work hard to get better. You have a great gift. deepest respect and bows z Check out my latest song called All Smokey
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| Bob6stringer said 13 days ago (November 11th, 2009) | |
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Ooh la la! Even the "no" 52 seconds in and the obvious "canned" drum is PERFECT for your playful lyric and vocal delivery. Lovely tone and great pitch. HAHA -- before I clicked "Post Comment" I read Ziti's comment and he said what I just said, but better. Plus, he added "My Dear." I can't top that. But wow, I have to hear more. Great to meet you(r music)! Check out my latest song called Yours and Mine
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| Bob6stringer said 13 days ago (November 11th, 2009) | |
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Ooh la la! Even the "no" 52 seconds in and the obvious "canned" drum is PERFECT for your playful lyric and vocal delivery. Lovely tone and great pitch. HAHA -- before I clicked "Post Comment" I read Ziti's comment and he said what I just said, but better. Plus, he added "My Dear." I can't top that. But wow, I have to hear more. Great to meet you(r music)! Check out my latest song called Yours and Mine
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Ed Hannifin
You've got a gift for melody...
Your voice is very nice on this one. I like that you change the way that you use it across the course of the song... I like the 'la la la la' bits... I like the handclaps, if that's what they are, right at the beginning, and the arpeggiating whatever-it-is at the beginning, too...
You also seem to have a gift for being serious with a sense of humor...
You write a strong lyric...
Suggestions? On my headphones, the vocal could come forward just a little bit, for clarity. Not so far that it hangs above the other tracks, but enough so that I'm not sitting here wishing for posted lyrics. Second suggestion/request: post the lyrics. And, although I'm pretty sure that you want the abrupt ending, I think stopping the music and letting the master fader come down slowly allows for something that sounds like a dramatic full stop but still has some 'air' in it.
Looks like I'll have to check back at dinner to see if there's a third--or a fourth--song up...
Good stuff...
Ed