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saw her on the beach one summer day....and i still miss her!
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| Moviz said 653 days ago (February 10th, 2008) | |
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Nice one Mark I like the freshness of this sound. Like travelling along an open road in the sun in an open top, The whole sound is put together well. Love the keyboard and the guitar accompaniment and the nice solo guitar too, regards M Check out my latest song called Come Back Billie
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| evolvweb said 653 days ago (February 10th, 2008) | |
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Nice work as always! This has that 80's vibe that I would expect from you but it also would fit in the next Final Fantasy or Kingdom Hearts. I think its great with or without vocals..."trippy" is the word that comes to mind. Thanks for sharing, Tobin Check out my latest song called Growing Pains
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| Vic Holman said 653 days ago (February 10th, 2008) | |
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groovin! another great tune. I am a little surprised that you didn't add vocals to this. non the less, it sounds great. Check out my latest song called November
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| Diviner said 653 days ago (February 10th, 2008) | |
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Cool track I like the tunes from the 80's. That was my growing up decade when I was innocent before I joined the chemical generation of the 90's. This is a very nice track and puts forward your emotions very well. Nice one, well done. Check out my latest song called Space Program (Space Race 2009)
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| said 653 days ago (February 10th, 2008) | |
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Yes Yes Yes Outstanding my Boy, I dig this all the way from top to bottom very cool... Shadow |
| said 653 days ago (February 11th, 2008) | |
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Great Good intro... And when the piano starts, it sounds amazing..... Great track.... |
| lupiroz said 653 days ago (February 11th, 2008) | |
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Cool chords sequence, supercatchy arrangement and the piano&guitar melodies really make me image that same beach and that same supercool girl....I miss her too! Check out my latest song called Monday's Melodies
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| MMI said 653 days ago (February 11th, 2008) | |
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wow Musically this is a stellar work. Just beautiful. One production note, I'd go for a little more separation. Move (pan) the piano a little left and the guitar a little right (a least for the chords, you could centre it again for the solo bit). That'll make room for yours or someone else's fabulous voice. Oh and call me slow, I just now connected you with your icomp persona. Good to see ya. -Georg Check out my latest song called We Will See
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| that80sboy said 653 days ago (February 11th, 2008) | |
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yeah cool idea...i did have it out to argales to sing on but still hoping!! Check out my latest song called please save me
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| mccannmp1 said 652 days ago (February 11th, 2008) | |
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Very Catchy Hey Man, Glad I found you...I embrace my 80's roots as well Cheers, Mike Check out my latest song called Push and Shove
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| Heightened said 652 days ago (February 11th, 2008) | |
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Yes, this is how I like it! Check out my latest song called A Journey Through Starburst Galaxy M82
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| bonnieprincejohnny said 652 days ago (February 12th, 2008) | |
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Squier is cool I've got a Squier too, it's a fine guitar . I would've liked some vocals concerning this beach chick but it's still a cool sound, Check out my latest song called twenty seven
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| thetiler said 651 days ago (February 12th, 2008) | |
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the pic alone should get a 10, wow!!!! But then the music sounds terrific. very catchy soft rock. All the sounds have that nice radio friendly sound. Like this, infectious beat indeed!!!!!!! Check out my latest song called The Bluebird Cafe (with two other guest)
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| AshleyBeanHead said 651 days ago (February 12th, 2008) | |
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Do I Dare Comment Here < She means everything to me, Like the sun setting on the sea. Everyday I want to be with you, Just let me paint your sky blue. Let me hold my arms around your waist, Sure, your can cry on my shoulders today. Your lips are gentle and soft to kiss, Like the waves splashing the Ocean mist. I saw you on the beach one summer day, I still remember the words today. I waited by the rocks hoping you show, I still go there and hope, you never know. Pros: Well structure (i.e. Intro->Verse->Chorus-Verse-Chorus->Bridge->Verse->Chorus->Ending) Tight rhythm section (Rhythm Guitar, Bass Drums), good use of percussion (congas, Tambourine)crystal clear Lead guitar, sooth synth-sweeps filling in the gaps tight wind the piece nicely. Great break that clearly establishes the ending. Cons: N/A Suggestion: What happened, you didn't feel like singing Mark? :) Check out my latest song called Heightened & ABH: 2P's & 5I's (Repost)
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| Barretok said 648 days ago (February 15th, 2008) | |
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Nice... Not being much of an 80's boy myself I like this song Mark. Very cool! I agree with the vox. You have a great voice. Why not? Still like it as is. B Check out my latest song called ANOTHER STORY
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| lavalamp said 647 days ago (February 17th, 2008) | |
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Hey........... You do great work combining real instruments and loops. Great balance. This is just begging for singing........perhabs you could collab with a female voice, I think that would sound fantastic. Dave Check out my latest song called Googolplex Times Zero
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| Cleopatra said 646 days ago (February 17th, 2008) | |
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Lovely tune Lovely tune Mark, nice to see u here, thanks for adding me. Check out my latest song called Bring Our Dad Back
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| Remark80 said 627 days ago (March 8th, 2008) | |
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Across the Room... This is such a great song. Being a guitarist I really like the Fender. Could see me walking into a club in slow motion while this is playing in the background while people float by me on my way to see my girl. Very cool. New fav. Check out my latest song called Weighted Down
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echoroom
this is great, real 80's vibe... i can see crockett and tubbs driving around to this ... you should do some vox for this, it's a great tune.
Like the guitar especially!
steve