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A fast pop-a-rock with an acoustic foundation and some fun stuff on top. This is my first vocal endevour. A bit sloppy but kinda cool. Not the lyrics for the intelligentia, but the melody's alright.
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Lyrics
We're out walking/in the sun/then she tells me/I'm the one/she is pretty/her eyes are blue/but I don't love her/'cause I've found You/She don't love me/like I do You/in the rain/I see the day/in the light/in the light/I get from You
regulus
is quit noticable. Some classic hooks here. Great start
and follow through, good feel over all. I felt you could
bring up the voice just a little. It has good impact and
sense of control. You nailed the words to the meter on
this one, good show.
You lost the aspect of believeability to the drum with
some added interjections. I recognize what you were after
but not quit there yet. The lead guitar, to me could be a
little closer to center on the pan and brouight to a level
with the other instruments. Good but not stunning.
Man if your just starting out on the carpet ride of music
I'm in awh to think of your potential. I look forwards to
your next chops...dude your cool...