This sounds great.... Good chords you use.... Wonder if i may put vocals on this tune, as a collab?.... Anyway.... It sounds great.... Big thumbs up....

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Please do Lightman, you're welcome.

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Excellent soundwork. Could imagine Lightman's voice on this ...
Your music is so light and provides room for fantasy and maybe additions :-)

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i can hear the sadness in this...i like the wandering guitar on this dave...and the soft keys...very nice!

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It's the COOL genre Dave, nice guitar, love the intro of the synth strings, fills out in a nice way...enjoyed...

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Hi

this is a lovely melody slow and beautifully dreamy with tinge of sadness the guitar played really beautifully too thank you.

Peace
Dee.

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very nice, dreamy tune, Dave!
KC

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Brief Desc: Very well versed guitar playing with a modern blues feel and a tad of jazz; something to sit bay with a cocktail and tell stories of the past%u2026

Pros: Great guitar playing (rhythm & lead), percussion works very well and balance symphonic synth in the background adds a nice touch. Overall, the production is nices except for the bass guitar track (see cons)

Cons: I heard a couple of peaks (clippings) from the bass guitar in a couple sections of your piece, if I had to guess, you were attempting to accentuate certain notes (i.e. like slap-bass effect).

Suggestion: May want to investigate where the bass punches occurred and attempt to fix or consider to re-do the bass track without the punches (IMO). This Is a Great Tune Dave, it deserves the attention (IMO).

~Doc :)


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