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| rsorensen said 647 days ago (February 18th, 2008) | |
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thanks for the input. maybe i'll try that when i revisit this one. Check out my latest song called Keep Your Chin Up
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| rsorensen said 647 days ago (February 18th, 2008) | |
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gb thanks allen. i recorded this before i started using garageband. im going to redo it in GB though and as you say 'fatten' everything up with better production and some slide work. just wanted to post it to get some feedback on the song itself. thanks for checking it out! Check out my latest song called Keep Your Chin Up
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| FleshFest said 647 days ago (February 18th, 2008) | |
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Muy Bueno Hey dude, I dig the vocals . nice job. catchy chorus too.. I'd definitely like to hear this song rerecorded with the riff cleaned up. Overall like the song and now its stuck in my head. Lotsa potential with that song Check out my latest song called Die me Dusza
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| rsorensen said 647 days ago (February 18th, 2008) | |
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:) thanks you will! I'm going to start tracking it tonight. thanks for listening Check out my latest song called Keep Your Chin Up
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| said 647 days ago (February 18th, 2008) | |
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Good, Hi I am looking forward to the finished product as I love your singing and your guitar sounds. Thanks for sharing, keep up the good work. Peace Dee. |
| rsorensen said 647 days ago (February 18th, 2008) | |
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thanks dee for checking this out. ive been meaning to check out your stuff too. will do now! Check out my latest song called Keep Your Chin Up
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| said 647 days ago (February 18th, 2008) | |
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Nice Like the vocals, more production and you have big hit... |
| rsorensen said 646 days ago (February 19th, 2008) | |
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:) I started re-recording last night and the guitars are sounding a lot better so far. Thanks for listening & commenting! Check out my latest song called Keep Your Chin Up
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| Sweet79 said 647 days ago (February 18th, 2008) | |
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I like it.. Hello :) I like it, very, very much, music and lyrics sounds nice... Thx! :) Check out my latest song called Rainy Jazzy Love
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| rsorensen said 646 days ago (February 19th, 2008) | |
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:) glad you like it! thanks for stopping by Check out my latest song called Keep Your Chin Up
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| lengold said 646 days ago (February 19th, 2008) | |
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This is such a well written and catchy song that it will work with any production. Cheers Len Check out my latest song called Dodgy Doughnut
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| rsorensen said 646 days ago (February 19th, 2008) | |
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thanks len I always really appreciate your comments. thanks for listening Check out my latest song called Keep Your Chin Up
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| Nick_Flash said 646 days ago (February 19th, 2008) | |
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Yeah Definitely has potential. This could almost build up slowly into a full (not too heavy) band at the end, but thats just the way I hear everything. Slide would be cool when you add that. I have to keep an eye out for the update. Voice sounds great as always. Check out my latest song called Wake Up
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| rsorensen said 645 days ago (February 20th, 2008) | |
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cool thanks nick. intereseting idea. i'll keep it in mind while re-recording. it does seem to be taking on a more bluesy edgier feel in GB already... thanks for your input! Check out my latest song called Keep Your Chin Up
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| thetiler said 645 days ago (February 20th, 2008) | |
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like the voice and the chugga, chugga of the guitar. Nice tonality of the acoustical guitar. Plus good textured vocal singing. Thanks for sharing! Check out my latest song called I't Been A While
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| rsorensen said 645 days ago (February 20th, 2008) | |
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:) thank you for checking it out and commenting. The chugging guitar is going to be more upfront next version. Check out my latest song called Keep Your Chin Up
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| SystematicFailure said 645 days ago (February 20th, 2008) | |
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/// this is nice it remind me of a Ben Harper song. well done cant wait to hear the redo! Check out my latest song called Pamoana
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| rsorensen said 645 days ago (February 20th, 2008) | |
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thanks! Yeah this was totally influenced by 'Please Me Like You Want To'. Good call! I love Ben Harper. Check out my latest song called Keep Your Chin Up
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| Alannah said 635 days ago (February 29th, 2008) | |
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OK am I drunk? ... Is something weird happening with my computer ... but this song is being played at WARP speed ... (Which I am wondering if it is a Macjams thing) ... or was it recorded that way .... the vocal sounds like Alvin and the Chipmunks ... and since no one commented on the speed I am thinking that it is playing superbly fast or something ..... glitch? or did you intentinally pitch it really really fast? I'm almost hesitating leaving this comment .... OKAY ... hahaha you might wanna check this out ... but I played it again with the OTHER player ... and WOW .. yes MUCH better ... slowed down ... no Alvin-ness there (I am safe to keep drinking now)! Is it me? or is it a bad MJ upload issue? by the way ... LUV the TUNE .... I would like to sing it .... Check out my latest song called I'm Drownin' - Smokey VW (feat Alannah) + Outtaorbit
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| rsorensen said 635 days ago (March 1st, 2008) | |
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hmmmm doesnt play fast for me on either player... maybe it was the beverages you were consuming? haha Anyway thanks for listening. I'm redoing this one right now and if you like I can shoot you over a version without my vocals when it's done if you wanna sing something over it. The new one's a lot more bluesy so far, but the vocal melody's the same. Check out my latest song called Keep Your Chin Up
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| SJB said 633 days ago (March 3rd, 2008) | |
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Chipmunks in the works Hi, I'm listening to this in the UK and Alannah is right it's really speeded up on the one player - it%u2019s all finished by 2 minutes 39 seconds (a minute quicker than it should)! The chipmunk effect is very amusing but it all sounds a lot better at the right speed on the Quicktime player. You mention above that you%u2019ll record a fatter version with some slide on - I%u2019ll definitely stop by again for a listen to that. Good song! Check out my latest song called Short tune
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| SJB said 633 days ago (March 3rd, 2008) | |
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%u2019 "%u2019" is suposed to be an apostrophe. Check out my latest song called Short tune
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| SJB said 633 days ago (March 3rd, 2008) | |
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%u2019 "%u2019" is suposed to be an apostrophe. Check out my latest song called Short tune
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| rsorensen said 632 days ago (March 4th, 2008) | |
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thanks yeah you know i've had this issue before and i think it has to do with a low bit-rate i recorded this at. why it doesnt play 'fast' every time on the player i'm not sure! Anyway thanks for listening and commenting. Check out my latest song called Keep Your Chin Up
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| Soundhound said 633 days ago (March 3rd, 2008) | |
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So Good To Me I concur with "davevan' just a little more production and this would be an interesting Track.... The lyrics can stand on there own they're strong enough..... Just lacks a bit of Dynamics, some edge. Over all pretty good. Check out my latest song called Do You Want To Be Mine..... " Instrumental "
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| rsorensen said 632 days ago (March 4th, 2008) | |
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i hear ya thanks new version coming soon! Check out my latest song called Keep Your Chin Up
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| said 632 days ago (March 4th, 2008) | |
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Great You really have a good voice... This is a good song... Good played on guitar.... I like this a lot... Good melody.... |
| rsorensen said 631 days ago (March 4th, 2008) | |
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thanks! really appreciate you listening and commenting Check out my latest song called Keep Your Chin Up
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| dlb said 631 days ago (March 5th, 2008) | |
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cool yes it is a bit hit and miss in places, but the song itself is great! Check out my latest song called All About You (ft. Linda Courtien)
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| rsorensen said 629 days ago (March 7th, 2008) | |
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hit and miss indeed - it's just a rough demo. I just finished the vox on the new version last night, however. just gotta do some slide over it all next. Check out my latest song called Keep Your Chin Up
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| lavalamp said 222 days ago (April 18th, 2009) | |
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Heard this... ...on the home page juke box. Dig the acoustic sound on this. Have you ever thought about revisiting this one. - But, maybe you have? I'll go check. Dig it brother. Dave Check out my latest song called Googolplex Times Zero
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| rsorensen said 222 days ago (April 18th, 2009) | |
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woah dude i forgot i even posted this one. i think i started a new version but abandoned it cuz i wasn't feelin it. not sure if i'll rerecord, but if i ever do an acoustic gig it'll probably be on the setlist. thanks for checking it out bro Check out my latest song called Keep Your Chin Up
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MunichG
I get the feeling that little lick you stick in there could be a lot longer, so you can really enjoy it. It seems like it goes by so fast. You could put in an unexpected pause in the intro, with that expanded lick. But I like it overall, the vocals especially.